"Only when we've lost everything are we free to do anything." Tyler Durden, character in Fight Club.

"None of us are as dumb as all of us." Old proverb.

"Go then. There's other worlds than these." Jake, character in Stephen King's The Gunslinger.

"There is no spoon." Nameless bit-character in The Matrix.

"I want you to hit me as hard as you can." Tyler Durden, character in Fight Club.

"Was I asleep? Had I slept?" Main character of Fight Club.

"Very good!" Hatori Hanzo, character in Kill Bill.

I've been writing short stories and fan fiction for a number of years now, and I recently finished one that I thought was pretty good. I felt like getting a few outside oppinions on it. Criticism is encouraged. I'm getting a little tired of unreallistic compliments from friends and family.