As uninteresting as it is I guess I should talk a little about myself.

My name is Jas, if you call me Jazzy I hope you genitals fall off. I'm only 14 (My story was written when I was 12) and it does kinda really does show in my writing.

I greatly enjoy all art forms.

I don't really have anything to say.

Stories:

My Aniki Is a Joker:

Summary:

The greatest weapon he was using against her was her own mind; prying on the doubts and uncertanties that already lurked there, which wouldn't let her be true to herself or live up to her goals. He was making her run on this exhausting, unsustainable hamster wheel, the more she moved her little paws the faster it would get and the less she thought about things.

Updating:

THIS STORY HAS BEEN DELETED FOR MULTIPLE REASONS.

I will not be writing fanfiction in the near future. So if you were following my story, I apologize.

Tips on Writing Fanfiction:

Logic is for losers. Ignore it completely. The fellow named 'Spock' is just crazy...

(note all sarcasm here folks and for these posts)

1. There is NO such thing as a male 'bad guy'. No matter HOW much his creator insists that he's a rambling psychopath. Deep down he's just misunderstood and tragic. A charater will Wail about how much they 'understand' him and cling onto him until he's good again or his creator leaves.

2. people can have 0% body fat. In fact, they don't weigh anymore than 120 pounds. Of course, no matter how thin you are, remember you're always super strong. What's that you say? Muscles have mass too? Not in a Sue they don't!

okay, I am not putting an example because we have all seen it. Mary-sue or not. Can't anybody make a slightly chubby character or maybe a healthy weight and what the hell is wrong with a little muscle on a girl?

3. Depth is another thing you can ignore. If you need a personality, just steal it off of another character. Better yet, observe a board, watch the male character you find "cool", ask to join, then totally rip off his persona. Guys totally dig female versions of themselves. Just make sure to be better than him at everything he does. Even if it's his job.

I hate cannonXOC where the OC is a female or male version of the cannon character. I see it all the time it's stupid. Are you too fucking lazy to make up your own character.

4. On the subject of learning. You DON'T need to learn. Just magically pull talents out of nowhere. Like being a great sniper out of the blue, or a wicked guitarist in 5 seconds. Because your OC had the magical talent of pulling taknowledge out of her ass.

5. Only regular people actually need make-up. Your character should only wear it to accent his or hers already lovely skin. Caked on eyeliner is totally cool. No one will say you look like a raccoon, I swear...

6. All flaws should be minor and used to make your character look adorable therefore not making them real flaws. *coughBellaSwancough*. Who can resist a girl who trips over her own feet or gets the sneezes from daisies?

7. Having more than four species in your bloodline is fine. They don't even have to make sense. Who is going to question a girl who is part vampire, part unicorn, or part mermaid? especially one who has 4.67 bodies. becasuse she cant die! inless you kill her 4.67 times!

okay time for REAL tips.

Summaries:

Summaries are one of the most important things in a story. It's the first thing readers look at and if it's not interesting you will not get many viewers. Don't get me wrong, people can have great stories and not get the attention they deserve all because of their summary. I'm not the best at witting them, but I try my best.

‘Better than it sounds’ means it is not better than it sounds.

‘Please give it a try’ occasionally accompanied by “first fanfic!’ means the author knows it’s really not great and is looking for pity.

Any excuse such as ‘I suck a summaries’ is not an excuse. If you can write a story you can write two sentences about that story.

If the summary does not have proper spelin, caPitaliZatiOn, and pu,nctu.atio!n the story will not either.

These are all story turn offs.

Good ideas for making your summary better are making it a quote or piece of dialogue in an important part in the story. Even if you haven’t gotten there yet. Sometimes even an important paragraph (that’s what I did). A paragraph that highlights your plot point or just something that seems important. The plus of using a paragraph is the reader gets to see how good your writing is.

It is also extremely important to put your pairing. A lot of people have a certain pairing they prefer or character they like paired with your OC. If your summary has mention of that you will attract the attention of more readers. I know as a fact that a lot of people only read fics with a certain pairing in them. Some will completely ignore your fic if you don’t make something like this known.

Mary Sues:

Possibly the most over-used fanfiction technique. I am one to admit that the world does need them occasionally, but PLEASE try and make your original characters original.

Do NOT write yourself into the story. Do NOT write your friends into the story. You may do this, if you really want however a majority of these so called “self inserts” are perfect. Perfect = Mary Sue. If you chose to do this make sure your being honest with yourself. don't make the "self insert" an amazing runner if you are not. Also if you do this DO NOT tell the readers! in any way, shape or form!

I have written Mary Sue before and as much as I don’t admit to it my current OC is bordering being a Mary Sue. However I am currently working on it!

Always keep in mind what a Mary Sue is while writing, this will help you avoid having to find out you have a Mary Sue later.

Don't forget about the less popular, but equally horrible Gary Stu!

You’re writing... what again?

Know what you’re writing. Check your facts, get it right.

It's Quidditch not Quittage.

It's one thing to be unable to write in character it’s another not know your character enough to get in character. OOC is not cool. If you recognize it, work on it. If you don’t, well, it really sucks to be your readers.

People may enjoy reading these stories. However you will lose readers. That I can promise you. I will warn you now that if you write a story like this you will have both praise and flames.

Clichés:

Try to avoid any clichés. If you are writing Hunter X Hunter fanfiction, it should be safe to assume that you know the clichés, right? If you don't know what a cliché is, it's basically a stereotype; something that happens often. In this case it would be a scenario, problem, solution, character trait etc. that happens often in stories. Sometime clichés can be really good, but way overused, but this is rarely the case. Not only are clichés annoying, they also often make your OC seem like a Mary sue, even if it’s not the case.

For example: The beautiful Victoria finds herself surrounded by foes, just in time Killua swoops in and saves the day.

This is way too overused, I'm sure everyone has read it before. Your OC is in trouble and the love interest is always there to save her. Her love interest is not always going to be there to save the day, is he? No. Why not have someone else save her? A character who your OC may not have gotten along with. If you have a situation where your OC is in trouble a good idea would be to have one of the most unexpected characters help her, within reason of course.

Victoria has a deadly disease, a disease that should get in her way, but doesn't. She accomplishes her goals anyway! Because, well, she’s perfect!

This is another thing I have seen so much, whether the character is blind, mute, has cancer or anything else that should hinder your character, the effects of said disease should be realistic. Another thing is giving he/she a skill to make up for it.

Victoria may be blind, but she has amazing hearing and can sense things miles way. Nothing can sneak up on her!

One day while Victoria is walking around town she makes eye contact the most gorgeous person she had ever seen. He smiled at her and they both knew it was love at first site.

Okay, no. Just no. No. No. No. No. When does this happen? Never. I hate any story that has love at first site in it, like come on are you that uncreative?

When Victoria was younger she lived next door to her best friend, Killua. One day he moved away and she never saw him again…….and guess what? Here he is again!

Again, there is a lot of coincidence in this situation. It’s almost like your forcing the romance, this just isn’t realistic.

Victoria is lost and she can’t seem to find a path. She meets Killua and he shows her the way!

Just so Cliché.

Do you get the picture?