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Joined 08-30-14, id: 6062334, Profile Updated: 12-22-14

Too lazy to write a ton.

I am a guy. USA, 17. Indian. And that is all you will know muahaha :)

I love Taco Bell doeeeee

Fanfic wise, I love:

Percy Jackson and the Olympians

Naruto

Kingdom Hearts


I'm really really creative. I can come up with good ideas for stories but I can't keep the motivation to continue writing stories. I lose interest. But I think I can be good as a helper or even as a second opinion.

I'm good at grammar, even though my profile won't show it. XD

I read a lot. I read fast.

I don't tolerate disrespect. It angers me when commenters think they're so fly as to disrespect the author on their work when they've put hours into brainstorming and writing and even possibly rewriting multiple times. If you don't like it, then suggest another way to alter the story or leave. Help the author make their story better. Don't degrade their work.


Ok on to the specifics..

Naruto-

Story structures I like:

Naruto becomes smart, strong, has a bloodline, etc. any combination works.

Sasuke realizes Itachi isn't worth his time and stays on Konoha. He turns good. Maybe even restarts the police force. He should be on par with Naruto slightly pulling ahead.

Sakura- eh. I'd put her at the same level as she is in the canon. I don't really like her but tons of authors have made her work and flow into the story perfectly! Meh.

Hinata- a strong and confident Hinata is an awesome Hinata. like bruh. You need her like that. otherwise the story is eh. And never make her lose to Sakura when it comes to naruto. Nope.

ino- as Sasuke's counterpart. She's from a clan, and I'm sure if she'd be serious about training during the academy years, she'd be leaps and bounds ahead Sakura.

shikamaru, shino- same.

choji and kiba- same.

everything that I write, I've seen from authors. If you know of their usernames, please message me so I can give them the well deserved credit.*


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Patriot's Dawn by Dr. Snakes MD reviews
Uzumaki Naruto was born to be a shinobi. He was supposed to be a killer; a protector of unparalleled skill. His lineage and the demon in his gut ensured that. In canon, his growth was stunted. In here, he had a reason to be strong. He has to survive. AU.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 26 - Words: 216,363 - Reviews: 3265 - Favs: 8,892 - Follows: 8,625 - Updated: 3/26 - Published: 10/31/2010 - Naruto U. - Complete
A Price for Peace by freowin reviews
At the end of the 4th Shinobi War, things don't go quite as planned for Naruto forcing him to make a sacrifice in order to bring the peace that he had been destined for.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 53 - Words: 294,982 - Reviews: 1826 - Favs: 2,736 - Follows: 2,892 - Updated: 1/16 - Published: 9/12/2012 - Naruto U., Karin U.
Purgatory by BloodRedDemon reviews
They turned their backs on him. They threw their hero into the deepest pits of hell. Unfortunately for those who betrayed him; their attempt to turn him helpless failed utterly. He learned to survive, he adapted to Tartarus. Now, the Hero of Olympus has returned. But is Percy the same? Or something else entirely?
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 131,578 - Reviews: 1313 - Favs: 3,258 - Follows: 3,433 - Updated: 7/13/2017 - Published: 10/27/2014 - Percy J., Artemis, Zoë N.
Sage by Digitize27 reviews
When Naruto is given a gift considered legendary even in a world where walking on water is a daily occurrence for some, will it lead him on a path towards peace or will the consequences of said gift leave a hole in his heart too large to fill?
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 93 - Words: 511,296 - Reviews: 7342 - Favs: 9,654 - Follows: 6,928 - Updated: 11/13/2016 - Published: 7/13/2013 - Naruto U., Fū, OC - Complete
Team 7's Ascension: Lines in the Sand by Eilyfe reviews
Keep fighting, they say, eventually you will have won. But what is winning? As order in the Element Nations collapses, Team Seven asks just that. The desert cries out and on blood-soaked dunes their sandals leave imprints. Where do you draw the line when war puts morality into question at every turn? [AU]
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 20 - Words: 208,163 - Reviews: 1015 - Favs: 2,260 - Follows: 1,978 - Updated: 9/3/2016 - Published: 3/8/2016 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H., Kakashi H. - Complete
Lost and Found by Anaklusmos14 reviews
Percy Jackson left Camp Half-Blood. He left the world of the gods after losing the love of his life. Lost, he and a couple friends find a new purpose, something that gives their lives meaning when it had none. Now their old lives are calling to them; old friends and family who need them. But haven't they given enough? AU of post HoO... on hold
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 79,772 - Reviews: 1648 - Favs: 1,615 - Follows: 1,729 - Updated: 8/19/2016 - Published: 1/6/2014 - Clarisse R., Percy J., Frank Z.
Team 7's Ascension: Blood Wings by Eilyfe reviews
In unity lies strength; each leaf is important or the beauty of the tree is lost. Some bonds, however, are difficult to forge and even harder to keep. The tide of blood nears, drums thunder, and three Genin stand tall as the world spirals into madness. [AU]
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 24 - Words: 205,713 - Reviews: 2170 - Favs: 6,728 - Follows: 4,901 - Updated: 3/8/2016 - Published: 12/22/2013 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H., Kakashi H. - Complete
Boiling Ice: Of Fire and Wind by Mar 'Darry' Darren reviews
In the conclusion of the Wave Mission, Sasuke causes Naruto to stuck with a hundred needles in his skin. The Kyubi then used the abundance of resources to create a pair of bloodlines for Naruto to use to fight for his friends. But Naruto's life is about to make a U-turn for the better and the worse. Duel Bloodline Naruto, Strong and Smart Naruto, NaruSakuHina Lemons Later on!
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 22 - Words: 101,069 - Reviews: 329 - Favs: 1,405 - Follows: 1,246 - Updated: 12/13/2015 - Published: 5/15/2014 - [Naruto U., Sakura H., Hinata H.] Haku - Complete
Son of the Rivers by PixelUp reviews
A being born from the Five Rivers of the Underworld, stronger than most gods, Feared by many. Always hiding, always there. An immortal being that carries out the will of the Rivers. Stronger than a First-Born of a god. Much stronger. He is made of the Essence of the rivers. But he was not always like this. He was once a demigod, the most powerful demigod. Perzoe!
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 22 - Words: 33,608 - Reviews: 723 - Favs: 1,984 - Follows: 2,160 - Updated: 10/17/2015 - Published: 1/30/2014 - Percy J., Zoë N.
The True Child Of Chaos by nutsofthechest reviews
This isn't your normal chaos story, what if Percy was a natural born son of chaos and adopted by her brother Order? Percy is born on another planet but is forced to go to earth the day he was born. What will happen to him when he is here? Will he ever Rated M: badass fight scenes, lemons, and harem Percy/Hestia, Hera, Artemis, Piper, Zoë, Bianca, Diana#2, Khione, Chaos#2.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 108 - Words: 663,753 - Reviews: 2976 - Favs: 3,594 - Follows: 2,655 - Updated: 4/11/2015 - Published: 1/3/2014 - Complete
The Fatal Flaw Of Olympus by nutsofthechest reviews
The gods made a mistake a mistake that change a man into a monster. The Flaw was once a man that was held high in regards by the gods. But with one action the son of Poseidon became a victim of Zeus wrath, But soon the gods need his help once more to not just save a planet but a galaxy. Rated M (Gore, blood, lemons, action) Percy/Thalia
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 52 - Words: 334,688 - Reviews: 1394 - Favs: 1,858 - Follows: 1,443 - Updated: 3/23/2015 - Published: 8/24/2014 - Percy J., Thalia G. - Complete
Percy Jackson and the Forgotten God by Selacha reviews
AU story. When 7-year old Percy Jackson runs away from an abusive home life, he is found and rescued by an ancient god, forgotten by humans and ignored by Olympus. The ancient deity only wants a family, and Percy needs a father. How will his life differ when Percy is raised by the eldest and most powerful of all the Gods? -T rating for child abuse and language.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 47,738 - Reviews: 451 - Favs: 1,646 - Follows: 1,598 - Updated: 4/16/2014 - Published: 7/4/2013 - Percy J.
Everlasting Promises by Starblade176 reviews
Percy, betrayed by who he thought was his soulmate, takes a daring act and swears himself by the oldest Primordial. Now, he has to deal with the consequences, both good and bad. Eventual Percy/Artemis
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 329,767 - Reviews: 4754 - Favs: 5,380 - Follows: 4,763 - Updated: 8/25/2013 - Published: 12/1/2011 - Percy J., Artemis
Son of Chaos Book One by kevin1984 reviews
Perseus has lost it all. Olympus has turned against him, Annabeth has dumped him and he has lost his family. In his last few minutes of life, Percy is visited by a mysterious figure, who gives him a chance to re-do everything, but this time not as a Son of Poseidon, but as a Son of Chaos. Percy/Thalia Pairing.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 32,988 - Reviews: 584 - Favs: 2,646 - Follows: 1,633 - Updated: 1/31/2013 - Published: 1/8/2013 - Percy J., Thalia G. - Complete