Too lazy to write a ton. I am a guy. USA, 17. Indian. And that is all you will know muahaha :) I love Taco Bell doeeeee Fanfic wise, I love: Percy Jackson and the Olympians Naruto Kingdom Hearts I'm really really creative. I can come up with good ideas for stories but I can't keep the motivation to continue writing stories. I lose interest. But I think I can be good as a helper or even as a second opinion. I'm good at grammar, even though my profile won't show it. XD I read a lot. I read fast. I don't tolerate disrespect. It angers me when commenters think they're so fly as to disrespect the author on their work when they've put hours into brainstorming and writing and even possibly rewriting multiple times. If you don't like it, then suggest another way to alter the story or leave. Help the author make their story better. Don't degrade their work. Ok on to the specifics.. Naruto- Story structures I like: Naruto becomes smart, strong, has a bloodline, etc. any combination works. Sasuke realizes Itachi isn't worth his time and stays on Konoha. He turns good. Maybe even restarts the police force. He should be on par with Naruto slightly pulling ahead. Sakura- eh. I'd put her at the same level as she is in the canon. I don't really like her but tons of authors have made her work and flow into the story perfectly! Meh. Hinata- a strong and confident Hinata is an awesome Hinata. like bruh. You need her like that. otherwise the story is eh. And never make her lose to Sakura when it comes to naruto. Nope. ino- as Sasuke's counterpart. She's from a clan, and I'm sure if she'd be serious about training during the academy years, she'd be leaps and bounds ahead Sakura. shikamaru, shino- same. choji and kiba- same. everything that I write, I've seen from authors. If you know of their usernames, please message me so I can give them the well deserved credit.* |
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