Author has written 8 stories for Ranma, and Naruto. Hi there, thanks for checking out my profile and (hopefully) reading my fanfic(s). I try to do my best in writing fanfiction that are at least decent in quality in story and language. So I value feedback that lets me know if my fics are good or not, and what I can do to improve. As someone writing her on fics, I know how it feels to want these kinds of reviews, so I do my best to give other writers constructive criticism (or attempts of it anyway). What is constructive criticism? Critiques that helps to improve the writer's work, writing style, content, etc. How to write constructive criticism: What did you like about the fic? What did you not like? What do you think can be improved? What do you think would enhance it? Suggestions for additions or reductions? Was there something the author needs to clear up? It also helps a lot if you elaborate and make clear what you think. And even if you can't come up with a suggestion or anything, a simple review on what you thought of the story is helpful too. I hope this was helpful! Happy reading and reviewing! |
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