Shalom. My name is Aphelion Rhyne. [Aphelion in unsigned reviews.]

You may have clicked here because you received a concrit that you thought to be harsh. If so, deal with. Trust me, there are many more people on this site that are way harsher than I. Believe me, I only write a review if the story has potential. I don't waste my name elaborating on detail for nothing, you know.

That's about it, for now. I'm available for Beta-reading if you so choose. Contact me on my email if you're interested.

Please note, I've been traveling between Nevada and Auckland for the past few weeks. Between that, balancing school and a job is difficult. Please forgive any lapse in updates/critiques.

Contact:

-s7starscream (AIM)
-cipherartist (skype)

Current stories:

Integrated: (as of 2/14/11) From the feedback I got, I will continue this story, albeit very slowly (it took me weeks to get the first chapter finished). But I've got a general plan for this story and a few endings in mind. Thanks for reading. Your reviews mean a lot!