A first fanfic that was really messy. I wrote this in my vacation and it is pretty bad. I'm not open for reviews as this story is way old.

Hey. I'm new to and I just published my first fanfiction. It can be bad, but it's my first attempt. My English isn't perfect either, I am from The Netherlands. Please review, maybe I will make more fanfictions :) I don't own Sandy and Pashmina, but I do own Peterson, Raymond and Bardo. I wasn't sure about rating. Also I want tips, I would really appreciate your help!