I am a work at home mom with three children, 17, 15, and 5. All of my children enjoy Harry Potter, when they first came out; I would read them aloud to my two older children. They read for their selves; however, it was a fabulous family time when I read them aloud. Now my five year has heard all of the books and everyday wants more. Therefore, I started telling him what Harry Potter et al did today. My older children suggested that I write fanfiction and not just tell it. I am not British so I am having some trouble with the difference in speech and I spell according to an American dictionary unless the word I am using is strictly British. Would appreciate comment and review on my story. Criticism will be embraced; preferable constructive. Praise will be heart-warming. Thanks for reading my fare. Samantha |