Mentalix
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Joined 12-16-15, id: 7372270, Profile Updated: 02-14-16
Author has written 4 stories for Sonic the Hedgehog.

Hi, I'm Mentalix (Obviously). I don't really know what to put here. Guess I'll just use this for some random junk.

About Me: Because I don't feel safe putting my personal info on the Internet (who knows who could be reading this...), I'll just tell you what kind of writer I am, so you can get a sense of whether or not you'd enjoy reading my stories. First off, I am not the usual homosexual high-school romance OC-using roleplay-loving Sonic writer. I am more like a normal writer.

All Stories: I do not like original characters, so I don't make those. Ever. Also I don't like to depict Sonic living in a home or being in high school. Those are bad ideas to me, they're done way too much. Also, I don't like swearing in stories. There's no real advantage to it, but there is a disadvantage: Younger audiences cannot read your stories. Even if they don't have accounts, I want to have a bigger audience, as long as they enjoy it. Also, never ever for-never ever make a Romance story, there are waaaaay too many of those, considering over a third of Sonic fanfics are romance. In addition, I don't like stories where you have to read other stories to understand it. I feel like you should be able to just jump into something. I promise, I won't ever do this, it'll all be in ONE story, not 500, but if I ever do, it'll be one where you don't have to read others to fully understand it.

On my story "The Final Day", I didn't plan anything of it out beforehand. I just came up with it as I typed. I also met my goal of NOT depiction Sonic living in a house or being in high school. I actually originally considered Sonic to die when I was typing the ending, but I didn't use it because I thought of a good idea for an ending, that fit especially with the Friendship genre. The original ending was chosen because it was unique, not many stories show losing to the bad guys, and being unique would be a good start on the site.

NOTE: This is the only story I'm actually proud of, I recommend you go read it, I have a really good ending for it as well.

For "The World Ends Without You", I chose this due to a poll I had on my profile, asking what my next story should be. It got 1 vote, and you can guess what won. I had actually wrote this story before, but I only got like 2 chapters before I deleted it because I didn't like it. So I tried again. This time, my goal was to have it take place after a event where Eggman won. The first time I wrote this I got a review criticizing it, and once again, I restarted. The text was doubled and much more detail is added. Afterwards, I changed the name of it from "Search of the Seven Chaos Emeralds" to "The World Ends Without You" and changed the summary a bit. The summary is still hard to understand, but its hard to come up with something in the character limit.

"One Voice" is a collection of stories I made that people can use, VERY bare bones right now, and I got the idea from user Quantum27, go check out her work!

Upcoming and possible:

1. A story named "100 Years to Live" will be my predecessor to "Trail of the Unknown". It will be about Sonic's 100 year life, with genre being poetry. Poetry is hard to make lots of words on, but all I'll have to do is make 1k words per chapter. Maybe a bunch of dumb adventures and every few years/chapters, a huge adventure.

2. I want a story just for Gamma.

3. Because uniqueness, I think I'll someday make a story about Sonic's birthday.

Cancelled:

1. My story "Trail of the Unknown" has been cancelled, because it was too much work. I even asked another author for help, but in the end, I cancelled it. I'll give a shoutout to this author I asked help from if I ever make another poetry I plan to have 100k words on. It got to ~3k words before I cancelled it.

NOTE: I DO NOT ROLEPLAY.

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The Loss You Gained by MazzyBooks reviews
School is about building character; to stay on top you kick everyone else down. This had worked fine for him until he pushed his Teacher, his friends and his Uncle too far. Now suffering from physical and mental abuse, the result of bad rumours and being the subject of hate by the people who should of helped him, Sonic doesn't know how to fix the pieces of his broken life.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 48 - Words: 205,554 - Reviews: 503 - Favs: 124 - Follows: 94 - Updated: 4/25/2018 - Published: 1/1/2015 - Sonic, Tails, Amy, Charles H. - Complete
Sonic the Hedgehog: Defender of America by AmericaverseWarlord reviews
God forgives... but Sonic the Hedgehog doesn't! Aided only by his electric guitar and titanic strength, Sonic clashes head-on in a fury of blood and burning rubber in his struggle against the wicked forces of Communism. Does this patriotic warlord have what it takes to prevent the Ameripocalypse and save his country, or will his star-spangled rage consume his soul?
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 85 - Words: 146,212 - Reviews: 109 - Favs: 49 - Follows: 30 - Updated: 12/15/2016 - Published: 5/20/2015 - [Sonic, Shadow] [Black Doom, Metal Madness/Metal Overlord] - Complete
Amazing Race I: Paper Mario: TTYD Edition by milesyoshidino34 reviews
Following the reign of the mighty Shadow Queen, twenty four characters that provided aid to the fight within the Thousand Year Door will partake in an amazing race around the world. Why? At the finish line waits...a million Smash coins...
Mario - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Parody - Chapters: 15 - Words: 134,234 - Reviews: 87 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 7/19/2006 - Published: 10/26/2005 - Complete
What if Metal Sonic ran on Windows 95 by NetRaptor reviews
A 3-page bout of wry, Win95-bashing.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 922 - Reviews: 137 - Favs: 98 - Follows: 8 - Published: 12/5/1999
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100 Years To Live reviews
Sonic's whole life, from the day he was born to the day he did his final deed, and everything in-between. Sorry I'm bad at these summaries.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,426 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/14/2016 - Published: 2/7/2016 - Sonic
One Voice reviews
Listed by genre; A collection of Sonic stories YOU can use in your own stories! Original credit for this idea goes to Quantum27. Rated M, just to be safe...
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: M - English - Parody - Chapters: 2 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/27/2016
The World Ends Without You reviews
Sonic, the only survivor from Eggmans last attack, faces him on the Death Egg in space. However, he is sent back down to Earth. The Earth is filled of Eggmans robots, Sonic only finds a few chili dogs, and the ultimate annihilator recharges in 72 hours. Sonic must quickly find the 7 Chaos Emeralds, each one giving new abilities to Sonic, such as faster speed and bigger jump height.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,340 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2015 - Sonic, Dr. Robotnik/Dr. Eggman
The Final Day reviews
Sonic wakes up to find himself with a time bomb. After not getting any help, Sonic plans to have vengeance on the man who did it, Dr. Eggman/Robotnik in his last day of his life, then party with his friends to make the best out of it. However, things don't turn out as expected.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,482 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 4 - Published: 12/19/2015 - Sonic, Tails, Dr. Robotnik/Dr. Eggman - Complete