![]() I have been a reader on this site for a long time now and only recently created an account after discovering a good use of it. I don't only give praises and constructive criticisms but I also flame, only for idiots who can't take a polite, helpful criticism. Basically, idiots need to learn some manners. What you mostly need to work on, Horrible grammar, pronunciation, spelling and lack of use of paragraphing. It's really difficult for many people to read your story if it's bunched up in one whole text per chapter. If it has been pointed out to you nicely, isn't it your responsibility to fix it instead of ignoring? OOC-ness No one would want to read about how Harry Potter cried himself dry in the toilet because he got bitch-slapped by a mouse. I understand if you have to change a certain personality/trait in order to fit the plotline but let's not take things to extremes, right? Marysues/Gary-stus I know how much people wants to be perfect and jot it down somewhere but let's not insult the creators by making their characters look like shit-whales while you're at it. Even if they are who you want to be, no one is interested in your wet dreams with your favourite character.When I say that they are not a Sue in my review, I was being sarcastic. Weaboos No one feels comfortable in having random Japanese phrases thrown into an English conversation. It doesn't make your character look better, they just sound plain dumb. Attitude I can't tolerate that the most. If you're going to show your spineless attitude against your readers, you obviously would be better off being a bitch. A real one. Common replies that I do not like Have you ever tried writing a story before? Get a pair of glasses and try to search for any stories in this page. If that isn't enough to tip you off; I don't write, I read. If you haven't, how can you flame me? Because I'm a reader and I have full right to do so. Read the aim of Fanfiction in the Guidelines and Rules section, dumbass. How do you expect me to improve if you flame me?! You obviously hadn't fully processed the review in your slow brain. I never simply write 'Shit fic' on my reviews for you. I'd rather not read any of your complaints! You just did. You have no right to flame me at all! I just did. If you don't like it, don't read it! You have to read my flame to dislike it, right? Same logic. You're rude! Yes, I am. I don't care about what you say! If you haven't, you wouldn't be trying to send me a wall of text unless you're trying to blind me. Not going to work. I've survived your shitty story. I don't care about you flamers who has nothing else to do! I appreciate the care for typing it out to inform us of that. There are people who likes it, okay? I'm sure you realized that I'm not one of these very few people. This is just a story! Why are you taking it so seriously? Why are YOU not taking your shit fic seriously? Seriously, what the hell? You're just a loser who doesn't know anything! You are just low enough to need a loser to open your eyes. Wow! Try writing a story and see how difficult it is! I dare you. Try writing a good story and see how better it is. I double dare you. Think YOU can write better? Duh. What do you have against me?! Your shameless stories. I love -insert character- so I feel that my OC is the best with them! Stop talking in your wet-dreams. This is who I want to be! You're the first person I know who wanted to become dumb. I worry for the people around you. I'm writing based on myself/a friend of mine! Nice shout out to the world that you/your friend is a moron. You/He/She/It must feel very ashamed now. I love writing so I don't care how bad I am! "I love roller-skating and I don't care how many times I break my legs." This is my story, I can do whatever I want with it! Read your disclaimer, read it again then read it for the third time. And, I'm a reader so I can say whatever I want about it. My story is good, okay?! Tsk. Delusional. This is written by a close friend of mine! You just insulted your close friend. You obviously don't have anything better to do with your time. Takes as much time as another random reviewer posting in your fic. Can you shut up? No. I will find you and I will kill you! Tut, tut, tut. If I have flamed you and you still choose to reply like a whiny fetus, you're not going to look any better than a shoe with a size of one. But if you accepted it and choose to improve instead of being stuck in your circle of delusions, you've earned my respect and I wish you luck on doing so. Another thing: if you plan to disable me from PM-ing you back, don't bother sending me a PM. I won't be able to read your rubbish due to FF.Net's functions. |