This is a story i wrote for my english coursework, its not great and i don't consider myself to be a good writer, but i was hoping to get some feedback on it, incase you can't figure it out, its a spiral plot, the chapters are different time line.
Misc. Movies - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,169 - Published: 8/4/2010 - Complete