A story I made up a long time ago about a boy who becomes a warrior, I would be very grateful for any reviews, even though the story isnt that good itself because I wrote it a while ago, theres two chapters up, so if you like them, I'll put others up)

' see, potter of Harry, when I leave with a fort, weakening like that phrases, know you that I am right, so much still, you dissimulate your thoughts by saying just simply the simplest thing that you can think of.'

"I feel tired, almost restless. Even though nobody has been hurt in any way, even though the village is safe and hasn’t been attacked in the past ten years since it has been built, even though Sevaen, Iris, I, and the other townspeople are ok, I still c

'The darkness couldn’t become any worse, but even so, it did become more tense and uncomfortable to Harry, and fear built up deep inside him. Voldemort’s expression, however, was grim and had no sign of backing away at all...'