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Editors:

Chris (the grammar nazi):

Chris is an avid reader with almost 93% of his 22 year life-span's worth of experience under his belt. Ever since he was a wee baby, Chris has been chewing through (not literally) books at an alarming rate. It was at about age 12 that he realized he was starting to run out of 12lb books to read, so he turned to the next best thing: infinite words. Fan-fiction. The discovery of the world of fan-fiction was a glorious dive for our young hero. To his horror, however, he discovered that fan-fiction was not as polished as actual fiction, or the non- variety. The worlds of grammar, consistency, and substance were at stake in our hero's unstable and feeble mindset, so he set out on a quest: Find adventurers such as himself, rag-tag together to help correct these sorely neglected worlds, and make them a better place.

Dan Dan (The Young Earth):

Deen of the Earth, Dan Dan, defender of the truth, ruler of the intellect and mayor of abstract ideologies. Born in the pits of Socrates’ bowels, a silent but deadly force was brought into the world. Dan Dan was that force. With opinions that mattered more than people's lives, decision-making that lead to Jesus’ crucifixion, stories bend to the whim of him, to think he’s stuck here writing stupid shit. Dan Dan is known for his various tales of cellar diving into italian realism, avangard, christian romances that end with the main character dying all the time, etc. Therefore no one can top his storytelling and gramgram abilities.

John (Drunk Ragelord):

When John was born he was diagnosed with fetal alcoholic syndrome. This meant he had a one hundred percent chance of becoming an alcoholic, and that he did. He would drink the liquids from baby wipes until the age of three, when he would start climbing into the bathroom closet and drink the rubbing alcohol. At the age of 11 his brain cells died and his liver exploded so he had a computer expert install new ones and update his operating system. He had so much brain power and his liver was so oversized that in order for his body to be able to handle that much power he had to drink constantly, which he had no problem with along with typing run on sentences that seem to never end similarly to the fan-fictions he, Chris, and Dan like to find on those lonely nights at the dark and desolate corners of their respective basements which implies that they still live with their parents and chances are they probably do. But we're not going to tell you the troof. ;)

Reviews start here:

Ch. 1 Review for Addictions, by E82