LumenUmbra
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Author has written 3 stories for Fire Emblem.

Hey guys it's LumenUmbra, or you can just call me Lumen. I don't really mind. And although the name sounds boyish I am actually a girl in high school so my writing is gonna suck from time to time.

Thing about me:

Gendre: Female (Despite the name)

Birthday: Here is a hint: archer (And not my fault if you don't know the zodiac)

Things I like: Not sure actually

Thing I don't like: Shopping, Wearing girly cloths especially if it is pink or purple even wearing a dress or skirt is off the table, Talking about boys, Listening to commercial pop(can't stand Kpop), Hot areas. (Yes I am a girl)

Passe times: Drawing (The profile picture can give you an idea of how good or bad I am), Playing my traverse flute, Playing Video Games, Writing (Even though I suck), Reading

Video games I play and/or have

  1. The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess HD (Yes this is my only Wii U game)
  2. The legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time
  3. The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask
  4. Fire Emblem: Shadow Dragon
  5. Fire Emblem: Awakening
  6. Fire Emblem: Fates (Birthrights, Conquest and Revelations)
  7. Bleach the third Phantom
  8. Super Smash Bros. 3DS
  9. Pokemon: Heart Gold
  10. Pokemon: White
  11. Pokemon: X and Y
  12. Pokemon: Alpha Sapphire and Omega Ruby
  13. Bravely Default
  14. Bravely Second
  15. Pokemon Sun and Moon

I don't not play Mario or Sonic I absolutely hate the games no exceptions and yes I have played the games

Animes I watch/watched (there are more than what I write)

  1. Bleach (hate the ending though)
  2. Naruto/Naruto Shippuden
  3. Fairy Tail (Only when I'm bored)
  4. No.6
  5. World Trigger
  6. The Sacred Blacksmith
  7. SAO / SAO II (I regret it... yet I still hold on to the hope that it will not stay horrible...)
  8. Blue Exorcist
  9. Attack on Titan

Marriage Paring form Awakening

Chrom x Robin

Lissa x Henry

Sumia x Gaius

Olivia x Lon'qu

Cordelia x Stalh

Thraja x Vaike

Panne x Virion

Nowi x Donnel

Miriel x Gregor

Maribelle x Libra

Sully x Kellam

Cherche x Frederick


Theses are similarities I have noticed between game, other characters or other thing all together, and I pretty sure I'm not the only one. And don't get the wrong idea I love the series, but for me these are just to obvious. I won't include the Fates clones however. (These are all Fire Emblem related by the way)

1. Soren and Robin have similar story when meeting the hero (Ike and Chrom) of their games or world... timeline? Well anyway. These two, though under different circumstances, have a lot of similarities in my opinion. Okay here we go: they both wield magic, they are both tacticians, they are best friends with the main character and would even die for them, they are also their advisers, both have marks since their births (Soren's being the mark of a Branded and Robin's being the mark of Grima. Robin's as we all know will disappear, but of course that depends on your choice in the endgame.) their fathers are antagonists as well as Kings and considered to be mad, both their fathers saw out for something in their child, they both have no memory of their mother, both have a relation to a dragon in some way (Robin's being tied to Grima and Soren's being his Laguz blood in Draconic in nature.) so since Soren has been around much longer I guess Robin was probably based of him when it come to the character's story. And it doesn't help that if Robin is chosen as male then he could very well have the same relation with Chrom, like Ike and Soren. And before anyone asks... no, I do not ship either of them since their both boys and while I have absolutely no problem with this in real life, I just think it's a bit strange to do in a video game.

2. The resurrecting characters in Fates is like the reanimation jutsu in Naruto. Okay I absolutely cannot be the only one that has notice this. They both rise form the dead and still have control of their thoughts, but not their bodies. They are also controlled by someone.

3. Corrin and Link are introduced in similar ways. In The Legend of Zelda Link is often introduced as sleepy or lazy and in Ocarina of Time and in Skyward Sword Link is introduced after waking up form an event that happens in the future. This is the same thing that happens to Corrin.

4. Corrin's dragon form is the Fire Emblem version of Dialga in Pokemon. Look it up if you don't believe me. To get a almost complet version for Pokemon fans who don't intend to get a FE Fates game just imagine Dialga with Serperior's tail, Charizad's wings and Cranidos' head for it's face, once you've imagined that then turn it silver and there you go.

5. Nohr looks like a darker version of the Soul society from Bleach.

6. The logo for Pokemon Sun and Moon looks like the one in FE Birthrights and Conquest.

7. Kiragi is Male Morgan in FE Fates. This is something that I quickly noticed after recruiting him, both are smiles in battle, are both intelligent, are optimistic. Not as much as Soren and Robin, but you see the point.

8. The Fujin Yumi is like the Quincy Bow in Bleach. Their both energy weapons that have unlimited uses.

9. Corrin's story resembles that of Rapunzel in the sense that they were both kidnapped from their family and were both confined in a tower and not allowed to go outside. ...Yes I made a reference to a Disney princess story.

10. Azura is like the Lady of the Lake form the King Arthur legend.

11. Yato and Excalibur where found almost the same way and they choose their wielder. In the sense of being wedged into something, only you know Arthur actually pull his sword out while the Avatar's just lies to him.

12. Azura's singing power is almost like Rat's (Nezumi) in the anime no. 6.

13. Kamui is almost the same as Kirito. Seriously how so these two keep beating the odds and let's not forget cheating the laws of death. And let's can forget the ability to flirt with all the allied female characters including their own siblings and cousin.

14. Azura is almost Asuna(ALO form) both in personality (minus the bitch part) and in name and appearance.

15. Yuuki Konno from SAO looks almost exactly the same as Mia form FE Path of Radiance and Radiant Dawn.

16. Kamui x Azura = Kirito x Asuna. To make it an exact replica all SAO would have to do is switch Asuna's position with Suguha's. I do not approve of the Kirito x Asuna by the way. It's total RIDICULOUS!! Seriously almost every time Asuna encountered Kirito in SAO she was always a scene where she was either hurting him or threatening to hurt him! Not to mention they also introduced Yui and then thought of her as their daughter after knowing her for less than a DAY!!

That's what I've got so far there a probably a lot more.


These are just things that I think are mistakes or shouldn't happen. And again I don't mean to offend anyone this is purely my opinion.

Fire Emblem

1. FE Awakening chapter 2 and 3 regarding Sumia. Okay let's put aside that she's in a pegasus uniform for a moment, in chapter two it is clearly shown that she has little experience right? So how the hell is it possible that in chapter 3 she is shown wielding a lance and knows how to properly fly a pegasus?! Oh yeah and lets not forget that the pegasus, conveniently, has a pagesus tarp over it. And no I won't accept some kind of excuse like someone gave it to her, because the lance would have been used. She is obviously unarmed in the second chapter since she can't be used and in the beginning of chapter 3 she is nowhere in sight, so she stayed behind for a while, but even so from what the map looked like there is no village next by. And even if their was I'm pretty sure that they would have evacuated. And even in the cut-scene lovebirds she isn't even shown with an equipped weapon.

2. Fire Emblem Awakening 'Lovebirds' cut scene. Oh. My. God. Their are so manny things wrong going in this including the one I just mentioned above this. Firstly the scene opens up with the Feroxi soldiers throwing javelins so why the hell is Chrom no trying to get away or someone like Robin or Miriel trying to destroy them when the either have a throwable weapon, magic or arrows? Or something like Frederick, Sully, Sthal or even Kallem not trying to prevent Chrom form being hit? Isn't he the crowned prince of Ylisse or did they all suddenly forget? Instead we have Sumia who's presence their makes no sense at all! You really expect me to believe the She managed to get Chrom onto the back her pegasus and avoid all the javelins without getting hit once?! NO! And let's not forget the whole 'she saved my life now I'm falling in love with her' cliche. Oh and Chrom finally draws his sword wile on the pegasus... shouldn't he have done that while he was on the ground... to I don't know PROTECT HIMSELF?! Because it was pretty obvious that the others weren't going to do anything. And why would you even draw your sword only to not fight at all and just come back down. And even if he did fight there would be strong chances that he could strike the pegasus' wing or sumia! ...not that I'd have a problem with that. The whole scene itself makes it look like the clumsy idiot is actually going to do something in the story.

3. Chrom x Sumia. Okay let's just get one think clear and that is: I absolutely positively hate Sumia! I don't know maybe it's her tripping on absolutely nothing or the fact she doesn't know what the hell a slap is... honestly her inexperience just seem to make it worse than Corrin's. Her support conversation with Chrom just made my disliking to her even worst. I mean how much obvious can you get?! I don't know maybe it's just me, but reading through the first time was just torture. I don't care if she is picture as Chrom's wife in the opening. I personally just find it stupid. I've played the story through as both the male and Female Robin several time and paring Chrom up with someone else is honestly better than Sumia. ...Well maybe at the exception of Maribelle.

4. Soren x Ike. I'll be honest I don't have much of a problem with this even though I don't ship them. There is just a little problem regarding their lifespan. Keep in mind that Ike is a Beorc and Soren a Black Dragon Branded. According to the Fire Emblem website Beorc have and average lifespan of 60 years. A Black Dragon Branded's lifespan is more than triple that of a Beroc at 185 years. In Radiant Dawn Ike is 20 so shipping these tow means that in about 40 years Soren will be heart broken and lonely.

5. FE Fates weapon durance. This has to be one of the worsts. It makes sense that a divine weapon can't break (you know unless you're Anankos in witch case say it was nice knowing you Yato) but a regular weapon will break. And I swear this makes even less sense with the archers.

6. FE Awakening end of chapter 13 if Sumia is Chrom's wife: Okay what the hell is wrong with her...?! All Chrom and Lucina did was walk away for a few minutes and she comes into the scene plucking out flower petals wondering if her husband loves her or not!? How does any of this make sense?! They been alone for only a few minutes! And Maribelle, Sully, and Olivia's are just as bad but at least they have the right idea to be upset and not destroy plant life and wondering about your love life senselessly! To be honest the best pick for Chrom is either the village maiden or Robin because at least the maiden isn't even there and Robin is only sightly annoyed and no acting like a maniac or a crybaby!

7. The fact that they allow the children characters in fates to have and S-Support with each other or the Avatar. This made sence in Awakening since they were from the future and technically are all adults, but it makes no sense in Fates I mean look at them they only look to be around 8 to 16 year old! And I don't care if the time skip is implemented or not you still have to take into account that at some point Shiro and Siegbert rule their kingdoms! And that can't happen if their about the same age as their fathers.

8. The Avatar's capability of S-Supporting every character of the opposite gender. One note... YOU HAVE TO BE COMPLETELY BLIND IF YOU CAN'T NOTICE AGE DIFFERENCE IN CHARACTER DESIGN!!! Seriously why is it even possible for someone of Corrin or Robin's age to marry someone like Gunther, Gregor, Miriel, Shura or any of the Fates children and have a child with them in the first place!?

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Blood Of Dragons by Sub-Atomic Grape reviews
Ylisse carries a history of dragons, and stories whisper of their powers mingling with Exalts and Grimleal. To a prince and tactician they are only tales, until a fateful night burns away myth and makes it all too real. Together they will have to face down kings, conquerors, and what lurks in their own blood. [AU: Female Avatar/Chrom]
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 71 - Words: 344,072 - Reviews: 161 - Favs: 235 - Follows: 264 - Updated: 8/4/2018 - Published: 4/8/2016 - [Avatar/Robin, Chrom] Lucina, Morgan - Complete
For Lucina by When the Moon Met the Sun reviews
"I'm going to speak plainly. That document describes your ex-wife's intent to gain full custody of Lucina, and there's a high likelihood you could lose your daughter." Chrom only has one choice if he intends to keep his daughter, and Robin's the only one who can help him. Chrobin Week Day 2: AU
Fire Emblem - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 6 - Words: 23,291 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 102 - Follows: 137 - Updated: 7/29/2018 - Published: 12/8/2015 - [Avatar/Robin, Chrom]
Shepherd's Song by uprisingdragon reviews
After waking up with no memory, Robin is thrust head-first into the world of Marching Band with her new friend and fellow drum major, Chrom. Everything seems innocent until Plegia Academy starts to overstep their boundaries. Not only that, but Robin has a bad feeling that someone is after her. Band/High School AU.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 55 - Words: 334,856 - Reviews: 228 - Favs: 121 - Follows: 128 - Updated: 1/2/2018 - Published: 2/13/2015 - [Avatar/Robin, Chrom] Lissa, Frederick
Cold Tea by dualbloodlines reviews
"I have it easy, because I don't have to forget," Robin continued, looking back at her. "People like us, we have to make new happy memories to replace the old, and find new things to smile about." Lucina struggles to choose between her mission for the greater good and her own feelings. A Robin and Lucina fanfic that follows the second half of the game and goes a little beyond.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 29 - Words: 261,522 - Reviews: 320 - Favs: 678 - Follows: 665 - Updated: 7/2/2017 - Published: 1/2/2015 - [Avatar/Robin, Lucina] Morgan
Waiting on the Future by Arthur97 reviews
When Lucina went back, she went back a little too far, and now she has found herself in the company of a somewhat familiar face. Now her quest to change the future may change more than she had intended. (Cover image is my attempt at combining two screenshots from Heroes. Rights belong to Nintendo and Intelligent Systems).
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 61 - Words: 78,964 - Reviews: 317 - Favs: 283 - Follows: 293 - Updated: 5/14/2017 - Published: 1/5/2017 - [Avatar/Robin, Lucina] - Complete
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Fates reviews
kamui is a 19 year-old prince living in the northern tower of Nohr. When time finally come for him to receive his first mission, he sees out with his two retainers and a soldier of the king's. However he is captured by Hoshido. After spending sone time in enemy territory and learning the truth about himself will he go back to the family that raised him or the one he was born too.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 18 - Words: 124,923 - Reviews: 51 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 3/3/2017 - Published: 5/7/2016 - [Avatar/Corrin, Azura]
Haunted House reviews
It's a stormy evening at castle Krakenburg and Kamui is hiding from Camilla. While hiding he is found by Azura and is brought to her room where she decides to tell him a scary story. Rated T to be safe
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,484 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/31/2016
Tales of old reviews
Chrom and Robin are overworked and Lucina, Mark, and Morgan can't sleep. Solution spend the night as a family and let Chrom tell a story. (Ch.1) A series of short stories.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,595 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 5/31/2016 - Published: 5/13/2016 - Avatar/Robin, Chrom, Lucina, Morgan