In any case, she's not new to writing. Sure, she may be quite young (considering I'm thought of as 'young' around here as well) but she's got better grammar and spelling than I've seen many 16 year olds display on this site. It's kind of ironic, but there you have it.

Yes, her humor could use a bit of (okay, a lot of) development, but she's a fairly good novice. In any case, please review her stories. Constructive criticism is a good thing, and she knows it, or I'll kick her little arse.

Oh, yeah, she is also a horse-freak. It's quite scary how much she knows about them. *shakes head* She loves to play Horseland.com and Neopets.com, and one of her many accounts is HorseGurl66 I think...

I'm sure she'll re-do this later, but she asked me to post her first story so yeah...play nice kids.

-Tithin