First of all, Hello There. :3

Critics are welcome, but please no put downs. I'm a human being.

So here is a story I made many many MANY years ago and I just want to know what you guys think about it. First, My native language is not english, is spanish. So, first I will upload half of the story in spanish THEN im going to re-upload it in english C: (I will try to do it the same day of the spanish uploads).

I just want to make everyone happy ny uploading the story in a language they can understand C:

Please leave reviews!! I will like to know what you think

(Spanish)

Hola mis queridos lectores :3

Las criticas son bienvenidas, pero no me desprecien :(. Tengo sentimientos.

Aquí esta una historia que hice hace MUCHOS años y la vi por ahí paseando y me dieron ganas de subirla para ver que pensaban (a pesar de que no los conozco) :3

por favor comenten!!! se los agradecería mucho :D