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Joined 03-24-17, id: 8975217, Profile Updated: 12-07-18
Author has written 2 stories for Minami-ke, and Naruto.

Hi everyone! I like writing and wanna get better at it. My interests vary from anime, cartoons, comics, books etc.

Chapter 13 of Konoha Academy will update on December 27th.

Current works:

Konoha Academy:

A Naruto high school AU. It contains several parallels with the Anime/Manga and takes creative liberties to account for it not taking place in the ninja world and because I'm not Masashi Kishimoto.

Why I'm writing it: I love Naruto and I love most of its characters. Additionally, Naruto has many characters and, at least in Shippuden, fall around the high school age. I thought this would make it easier to write a high school AU. I see high school as a coming of age story. Some people say it's in college, but I think it's high school. In a way, it's a 3 year/ 4 year crash course on life.

Fun facts:

  1. The soccer bit of the story is inspired by my brother. It's the only thing he takes seriously, and I'm so proud of him!
  2. In chapter 2, Kiba says he found Akamaru on the roof of his house after coming back home. Shino asks Kiba why his first instinct is to take a picture instead of figuring out how to get his dog down. That literally happened to me. I come back home and find my dog on the roof of the house with no clue how she got up there. My first instinct was to get her down. My mom's first instinct was to take a video, and I realized, when will I ever find my dog on the roof of my house ever again? So I took multiple pictures.
  3. Uncle Obito was originally supposed to be Uncle Madara. I really wanted to put Obito in the story, but couldn't figure out how, so I decided to switch Madara out for Obito 10 seconds before publishing chapter 2. I think stylistically, Madara would have fit the story better, but this is a fanfic, so why not! It's more fun for me.
  4. In chapter 7, Ino slaps both Shikamaru and Choji on the ear. In real life, I do a fair amount of theatre, and during the two times I had to slap my scene partner, they always told me to actually slap them instead of a stage slap. Something about it being more "realistic." I always hit them in the ear. Never mean to, but it's always in the ear.
  5. The titles for chapters 8 and 9 are inspired by the Pokemon Black and White games. Even though that wasn't my favorite of the Pokemon games, that concept about balancing realism and idealism has stuck with me since I beat it. By the way, I owned White.

This is my main story that I am working on.

After the Anime:

The events of Minami Ke that take place after the anime.

Why I'm writing it: The anime had so many webs, it's hilarious how none of the secrets got exposed! I wanted to see what would happen if one of them did. Mostly, I wanted to finish where the three sisters left off. It's a really good gag anime if anyone wants to check it out!

I have every intention on finishing this story. However, time and lack of audience interest has me shift my focus to Konoha Academy. I don't mind this story not getting attention since I'm writing it just for fun, but I feel I get more feedback from Konoha Academy, which will help me grow as a writer.

Top 5 Writing Pet Peeves:

5) Unrealistic Chemistry - Yeah they fuck, but do they actually care about each other? What do they do to show that they care about each other?

4) Useless information - Is the character the class president? Cool! Is it mentioned ever again? No. That said, if there's something weird going on, mention it. Otherwise, I'd wonder why does the character have pink hair?

3) Stereotypes as stereotypes - Kind of like a token, but not really. I think gay men are the most common example. Many gay male characters are overly flamboyant. There is nothing wrong with being a very flamboyant, but does he also ... like ... collect stamps? What's his life?! Or is he there just to screw guys and give the main character moral support?

2) Mary Sues and Gary Stews - I hate it when a character is "perfect," especially the main character. A flawless figure, a super genius, and loved by everyone?! No one's like that, and it's not believable. Give the character some faults! FYI, being an orphan or having a rough childhood doesn't count.

1) Bitchy/ evil characters - Just because someone's the "bad guy" doesn't mean they are a bad guy. No one thinks of themself as the villain. (If you do, I highly recommend seeking professional help.) So, give reason for why the villain is the villain or why a character acts so bitchy.

I make all of these mistakes. I never do it intentionally, but it always happens. If you ever spy this, please call me out either through a PM or in a review. I may debate you, but that's my way of learning. I'd really appreciate it. It will help me become a better writer. *

Five Facts About Me:

  1. I own four dogs.
  2. When I was a baby, I got chickenpox and have a circular scar on the bridge of my nose from scratching. When I was about 10, I found out a friend had a similar experience, but she had no scar because her parents put gloves on her hands to prevent her from scratching. I asked my parents why they didn't do that to me! They did. I just kept taking them off. I was a genius even as a baby.
  3. I'm pursuing a double major in International Business and Management. My international focus in Japan, so I actually speak some Japanese. Unfortunately, I barely know people who I can practice talking to, so whenever I do talk, I sound like Jimmy from South Park. I can understand perfectly, but my reading level's at the 5th grade.
  4. I don't know how to roll my r's.
  5. My favorite animal is the praying mantis.
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Kingdom For Two by ChronicallyChill reviews
Twenty feet. There's only twenty feet between their houses. But some days it felt like they were in different continents. Childhood friends turned secret lovers. Real Life AU Warning: ShiItaIzu is a pairing in this fic
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 25 - Words: 119,362 - Reviews: 616 - Favs: 488 - Follows: 642 - Updated: 2/1 - Published: 5/6/2017 - [Sakura H., Sasuke U.]
Why can't I give up on you? by catwithapencil reviews
They use to be great friends but, after a confession, some heart break and a lot of avoiding they grew apart. Now after almost five years they finally reunite in a cafe of all places and now are co-workers? will Naruto and Hinata regain their friendship? or will they become something more? Follow them on this adventure of love and mystery and find out
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 27 - Words: 259,741 - Reviews: 329 - Favs: 264 - Follows: 307 - Updated: 12/24/2018 - Published: 8/23/2015 - [Naruto U., Hinata H.] [Sasuke U., Sakura H.] - Complete
Second Chances by enzhe reviews
Naruto disappeared. Minato found him (12 years too late). Gritty modern AU. COMPLETE.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Suspense - Chapters: 42 - Words: 251,961 - Reviews: 1073 - Favs: 1,253 - Follows: 1,296 - Updated: 11/3/2018 - Published: 10/30/2010 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Hinata H., Minato N. - Complete
A Time To Remember by jjmcm541 reviews
Days fade in and out for Naruto. School and work at the library are his routines. He lives in a world where no one bothers him and he doesn't bother anyone else. So, what happens after the most popular girl in school takes an interest in the quiet boy that always sits alone? A party and a note is all it takes to turn Naruto's world upside down. Naruto X Hinata.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 19 - Words: 78,768 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 58 - Updated: 3/24/2018 - Published: 9/30/2015
It Was Winter by eliphya reviews
AU. Hinata and Naruto's friendship begins on a cold winter day in the bakery down the street, which becomes a special place of comfort and warmth, continuing to be so even years after they have separated. [NaruHina]
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 6 - Words: 34,833 - Reviews: 85 - Favs: 154 - Follows: 119 - Updated: 4/12/2017 - Published: 8/13/2016 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
Swallow by Misery's-Toll reviews
Hinata struggles to be herself. AU College fic NaruHina. COMPLETE.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 32,361 - Reviews: 93 - Favs: 131 - Follows: 88 - Updated: 5/30/2015 - Published: 3/13/2012 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
Somebody by Misery's-Toll reviews
Because remaining inconspicuous is impossible when you've painted a bright red target on your back. Sakura-centric, Sasuke/Sakura. High school fic. COMPLETE. (Contains a lot of potentially triggering content. Please use discretion.)
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 28 - Words: 87,051 - Reviews: 651 - Favs: 471 - Follows: 240 - Updated: 3/18/2011 - Published: 6/14/2008 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
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Konoha Academy reviews
Naruto and friends attend the private high school, Konoha Academy. They balance difficult moments of death, corporate corruption, and family secrets with love, friendship, and soccer. Warning: M for language, character death, and sexual content. Contains SasuSaku, NaruHina, and other pairings. Masashi Kishimoto owns Naruto and its characters.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 79,005 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 70 - Updated: 12/7/2018 - Published: 6/6/2017 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H., Hinata H.
After the Anime reviews
Three years have passed and Makoto still manages to keep his identity as Mako-chan a secret! ... Until puberty finally hits. This one revealed secret snowballs into love for all three Minami sisters. [Chiaki x Makoto] [Kana x Fujioka] [Haruka x Natsuki]
Minami-ke - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 10,665 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 4/7/2017 - Published: 4/6/2017