Quick guide to my reviews:

Story:

1. OMG, I have read it billion trillion zilion times before.
2. Boooring...
3. It cound be a bit better.
4. Really interesting.
5. Wow, this is brilliant!

Characterisation:

1. Why do you write my babies this way?
2. Nope.
3. A bit OOC.
4. That's my babies!
5. Wait, so this ISN"T canon?