Call me Onyx. I write a lot of more action based stories, and have gone into a grim reality mood. I am said to be really good for my age, but that's not saying much these days in America. I know I need a lot of improvement. If you wish to genuinely help, I would love it. Unless you demand a price; I can't pay for anything. Remember: I am a sane man who bes insane to stay sane. Puzzle over that for a few millenium.