“People expect much of me,

and too much pressure on me,

but there is no other way except by doing what I need to.”

FIGHT THE BLUES!

FYI guys, this account has been created for a sole purpose: CRITICISM.

And my main objective for now is: SMT:PERSONA3 (and FES). Just to make it clear, that is.

If you wanna know why I SUDDENLY appeared outofnowhere and review (or maybe criticize) you.. please READ my entire profile. Thank you.

Now, let me tell you a bit about myself.

Name : You can call me Aya, but that’s not my real name, it’s just a nickie. For instance, my grandma won’t call me by that name. Either way, it’s in the tail of my real name.

Gender : Of course I’m a female, duh.

Age : I’m a 16-years-old girl who’s practically busy of SHS’s sophomore life (like y’all know in P3.. but that doesn’t mean I’m such a player like Minato, having dates everyday! Hey.. no offense in that!)

Appearance : Eh? My appearance? Think of Mitsuru, I sorta look like her (Again.. no offense!) coz I’m a redhead (I’m not lying.. it’s as red as Mitsuru’s, and WHO SAID I COPIED HER!? No. I. Am. Not.) and I got this nickname “Queen” at school. Actually.. not the queen of goodness or obedient (like Mitsuru..). It’s a queen of rebellion. My tiiiiiiniest naughty act is jumping through the school’s window. chuckle At least I love language AND its component, so my English’s not that bad. And I... kinda have followers too. J

Interest : Playing video game haha, daydreaming, pink-black accessories, thinking of how can I make fun of someone that pissed me off :p

Enough about myself! This is a place for fanfiction, not bragging myself, Aya..

So.. Why did I choose to be a reviewer?The truth is, I love reading all your ficts guys! They’re absolutely amazing! It’s like a never ending story and possibility for P3, and other stories too. And, being a reviewer can actually be a ‘god’ itself. Ya know, all the flames and stuff. So, instead of writing a story, I choose to R&R them. But don’t worry; maybe sometime soon I’ll publish my own story. It’s just.. let’s say it’s in progress. I’ll keep you updated!

Ok. I don’t know how all of your profiles look like, coz I haven’t seen much of this ff.net. But supposedly, you put some charts, rite? I dunno.. You can tell me what to put in here later. For now, I’ll put some important things first.

CRITERIA OF BEING-REVIEWED STORY BY ME

(Note: read it if you wanna know how I’ll review)

1. PRIORITY: BIG and COMPLICATED PLOT, better if it has more than 10 chapters.

2. Oneshots, but sorry, poems are not included to be reviewed.

3. Not yaoi or yuri. Sorry, I’m not into those things.

4. Any genre is fine. Multiple genres prove better.

5. OC is fine. But please, don’t dominate the story with them. 3 or 4 OCs are enough.

6. Crossover is fine. But don’t forget to mention the guests (I’d figured you’ll say: “Of course!!”)

7. About AUs, I think I’ll sort them first. If I don’t review it, then sorry, it’s off my league. Maybe I’ll just notice you why though.

8.

I’ll add it more later if necessary.

PLUS POINTS IN A FICT (my opinion as the reviewer)

(This is valid only in the story, not in ‘Author’s Note’)

1. Using proper typing method. That’s CRITICAL, guys. It’s not about the language (coz you’re allowed to use anything you want, in my case J), but the TYPING.

For example, please don’t use abbreviations.

2. Not using too many writing emphasis in unusual and unnecessary place.

For example: conversation with italic. It’s enough to use only the quotation marks (“), or if you follow the US and UK rule, it’s using apostrophes (‘).

3. But if you use emphasis in right places, the fict will drain the reader’s attention.

For example: use it on sarcasm conditions.

4. If you’re using multiple POVs, it’s better that in one chapter, the POVs is less than or equals to 3. It’s making us a bit confused, with many POVs. But if you mastered the technique enough that it became challenging, why not?

5. Summarize the events happened in the last chapter in the beginning of a new one, or link back. This is also CRITICAL. But, yeah, I know that you’re lazy to do it.. But this is not a book that happened to be over in a pack; ficts keep going and is updated whenever you give us the continuation. Many readers keep forgetting the main point of the stories, or even what story it is, you know.

6. If you’re using subtitles or separators, it’s better to make it stands out; like bold-ing or italic-ing them. Yeah, I know, it’s basic knowledge. But.. we kept forgetting it, now, didn’t we?

I’ll add it more later if necessary, again.

TODAY’S CONDITION OF P3’S FICT IN FF.NET

(I’ll update this once in a while, and this is not a review/criticism/whatsoever, it’s just news)

October 2008

It seems the MitsuruxAkihiko pairing has yet to be descended (Hey, what’s with this formal attitude?) coz as you may’ve seen, the valuable romance stories are being dominated by them, while the other pairings just happens to be oneshots.

While P3 OC has come in several varieties, but is still dominated by girls (Probably coz the writers are girls in common, huh?) and is in a same role: become the other messiah.

Some yaoi and yuri has been exposed, but yaoi is dominating (as for now). The pairing? Well, it centers on Minato, like: MinatoxAkihiko, MinatoxJunpei, MinatoxRyoji, even MinatoxHidetoshi. But Akihiko has got the chance to be the main chara too, with Shinjiro (of course).

Social links has spread around too, and the writers are trying to expose the infamous ones, and make it worth to read. It’s nice, really! Keep up the good work! J

About the majority of the plot, it seems the awakening of Minato’s dead still comes first. Coz we, deep in our heart, don’t want Minato to be dead... rite?

DESIRED STORY

(I’ll give it in wide scoop, so I’m not limiting the main theme)

1. MinatoxYukari pairing

I know a bunch of story has already taken this pairing, but the REAL romance story (that has multiple genres and big plot) proves to be little. I challenge you to be the first to write that kind of story JAs the compensation, I’ll promote it to my network, like: friendster, facebook, multiply, myspace, wordpress, and so on (I’m not really bad at net life, you know!)

2. Aegis’s life

Hello.. She’s one of the main chara here! Nobody ever stop by to write things about her?

3. JunpeixChidori pairing

I know it’s sort of drama thingy, but after I re-watched the scene when Chidori died; it’s not so bad after all.

4. Ryoji’s life (especially his bad habit: flirting)

This should be a nice humorous story!

5.

I’ll add it more later if necessary, again.

STORY CHART OCTOBER 2008

(I’ll update this monthly)

BEST PLOT-BASED

1. D

2. D

3. D

4. D

5. D

BEST GENRE-BASED

(If you got both, then your story is trés magnifique.)

1. D

2. D

3. D

4. D

5. D

BEST AUTHOR

1. D

2. D

3. D

4. D

5. D

I think this is the end of my profile. Oh, and please read this; it’s important.

ATTENTION to all writers, please don’t consider me as a threat or something, coz I’m just here to improve your writings. And, I don’t review and judge for no good reason. I mean it. Maybe I will not use harsh words, but I seriously wanted to give an opinion for you. It’s all from my heart (Hey, when did it become so mellow?) So.. please take my reviews seriously too, and I’ll be gladly to help for another story J

And.. I hope to see you in your latest masterpiece! In Persona3, I hope J

xo xo

Aya

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“Is it like this? Is it always the same?

When a heartache begins, is it like this?

If you like this, will you remember my name?

Will you play it again, if you like this?”