Name:~Wolf
Birthday:May 19
Height:5' 4.5"
Build:Average-Athletic
Hair Color: Dark brown with two blonde streaks in the front
Eye Color: Brown
Likes: Martial arts, gay people, drawing, cracking jokes, writing, harassing, embarassing
Dislikes: Negative people, criticism, Mary-Sues, and boiled hot dogs

I only have one story up right now. There are lots of OC's in it, hopefully none of them are Mary- Sues/ Gary-Stus. Hopefully. Anyways, the characters of Jonothan Starsmore (Chamber) and Clarice Ferguson (Blink)were evo-ised by N and Kitten of Origin Of Speciies. Go visit there website, it's awesome! And the character of Fabian Cortez is evo-ised by Rosiel of Brotherly Love (another excellent website. Sadly though, she isn't updating anymore). Please give me an honest review of my story, and of anything that needs to be changed (spelling, grammar, OC'S...). Also, my friend Tiger created the characters of Jackson, Kelly, and Cody Thorne, and Cat created Lilly, Sanshani, Clay, Adam, Rhiannon, Hope, Matt, James, Zach, Kali, and Catarina. The rest are my characters. I do not own any of the X-Men, Brotherhood, or Acolyte characters. They belong to Marvel and Stan Lee.

And here are the quick bios for the OC's belonging to the Chain.
the CHAIN- Challenged Humanity and Impulsive Nonconformists

Alissa Avila- Wolf-17- able to learn abilities of other mutants. each power must be separately manifested in order for her to use it.

Sara Cass- Cat-17- can amplify or mute the volume of an object/person.

Elizabeth "Lizzy" Fiacco- Tiger-17- can transform her skin into different substances.

Audrey Kay- Poison Arrow-17- can cause disease in a living organism through skin-to-skin contact. symptoms include fever, rash, and hallucination if not treated within 24 hours upon infection.

Derek Avila- Parasite-12- can "invade" the body of a livin organism by "phasing" into them.

Jake Fiacco- Virus-12- can control electrical currents.

Clay Silkin- Illusion-18- can project thoughts into visual formats. has a sixth sense(uncontrollable ability to predict the outcome of an event before it happens).

Rhiannon Denver- Dream Weaver-17- siren (her singing and/or scream can stun or knock out a living organism).

Sanshani Rise- Pheonix-15- can transfor into a pheonix. every hour she bursts into flames and is rejuvinated physically.

Cody Thorne- Heat Stroke-12- can produce infrared waves of radiation.

Jackson Thorne- Black Out-19- can knock out a living organism by concentrating.

Kelly Thorne- Mirage-16- ablility to become invisible.

Marissa Brauer- Generate-12- can produce an object by concentrating. the greater the mass of the object, the more energy used and the more time it takes to create.

Joshua "Josh" Brauer- Alchemy-13- can change one substance into another substance (ex: wood to glass. the mass of the object does not change during the process.

Adam Marcus- Vine Whip-11- can shoot vines from his finger tips.

Tuan Lam- Gravity-9- can control the amount of gravity on an object/organism within a span of 50 feet from him.

Kiarra Kopelai- Detector-10- creates and invisible and impenetrable barrier around herself (can be applied to others through skin to skin contact).

Hope Ivring- Dragon-16- ability to fly with the use of two dragon-like wings protruding from her shoulder blades.

Juliana "Julie" Ayi- Light Force-11- can generate beams of light. beams can be different sizes, color, and shapes.

Blaze Charron- Wildfire-7- when in danger, a "guardian" (of sorts)created out of fire is "summoned" (appears). Usually takes form of a wolf.

Tyler Ochab- Foliage-11- can repair damaged plant life through thought.

Catarina Stark- Tabs-15- Anthro-cat. (Was born with fur, tail, eyes, ears, nose of a cat. has cat-like reflexes and senses). can create a small light in the palm of her left hand.

Kali Laurie- Hawkeye-15- can transform into a hawk.

Zachary "Zach' Nickels- Viper-17- can transform into a cobra, secrete venom from body, communicate with reptiles. was born with fangs, scales, and snake-like eyes.

Matthew "Matt" Goldman- Lizard-15- can transform into a komodo dragon.

Lilly Hartleib- Vapor-17- can "melt" her body into water. was born with scales, gills (in addition to lungs) and a fish-like tail.

James Caster- Shadow-18- body is made completely out of shadows (he is solid, though). can disappear when in darkness or in shadow. communicates telepathically.