ok well im a first timer to this stuff. um I would love some criticism about any and all of my work because Im the type to try harder and if yall kinda just give me a push i can do better.

i've read alot of stories on here and I like most of them. I want to be able to do what they wright about so that what im going to do.

my favorite shows are inuyasha, chobits, I love D N Angle, negima, xxxholic, you see where im going with all of them.

I want my stories to be well some of them to be really hot and sexy meaning i want to wright a porno thats right, but I also kind want to make the stories have spin off's like a new character and see where that goes.

should probably tell ya more about me. Im from texas, no matter where I curently live. Im texen born and raise so yes I have kind of an accecnt. i love metal its some of the best music out there, but thanks to a certain girl Im starting to love country too. Im taking college classes and hope to major in an IT feild. so why am I wrighting right? well my class semesters are so far apart that I have taken this up as a hobby. I also need to take the SAT test and maybe if I wright enough and get some tips about it I might pass with flying colors.

ok I dont like talking too much about my self so thats it.

please tell me how Im doing with the stories I look forward to it.