Mugetsu16
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Joined 11-10-13, id: 5312483, Profile Updated: 02-13-19
Author has written 7 stories for Naruto, High School DxD/ハイスクールD×D, Claymore, and Percy Jackson and the Olympians.

Started Reading Fanfiction - December 2011

Set up account on fan fiction.net - November 10, 2013, 2:33pm

Favorite Stories
The Battle Never Ends by Arthain Added: Feb. 13, 2019

Princess of Blacks/Black Queen Series by Silently Watches Added: Dec 24, 2018

In Flight by gabriel blessing Added: May 4, 2017

God Slaying Blade Works by Marcus Galen Sands Added: Nov. 16, 2016

A New Life by Infernal Maelstrom Added: Nov. 22, 2014

Namikaze Legend Series by BlackWolf501 Added: May 30, 2014

Proeliator of Rutilus Diluculo by Marutectz552 Added: Feb. 13, 2014

Story Published Dates
Forsaken Legend - 11/10/13
Blurred Lines - 03/01/14
The Immortal Fox Lord - 03/08/14
Legacy of Yin - 01/05/15
Embodiment of Desire - 09/06/15
Embodiment of Desire - BTS - 09/06/15
Ideas - 11/05/15

First Story Request - Shawn129 (03/18/14) - (Rejected, sorry)
First Follower Ever -
Xepulchrum
First Reviewer Ever - TyrionTheImp

Rants:
NarutoXHarem: Now don't get me wrong, some of these stories are written very well, but the grand majority of them are not. Some people make Naruto look like a man-whore since he is sleeping with 30 women. The only story I can think of that pulled of a harem well was Namikaze Legend. Every other one either rushes romances, or puts so many people in the pairings and spend so much time on the romance that it detracts from the plot. On an avg story, I can stomach at most four people being paired with Naruto, as long as it is with no one from Konoha, unless it is an Uzumaki. Most mass harem Naruto fanfics are absolute garbage.

CRA: I already have a problem with harem pairings, unless the story is well written. Do you want to know what is the number one way to destroy a Naruto fanfic? Use CRA as an excuse to justify a harem. I think that doing this shows how lazy and pathetic an author is. Instead of taking time to develop relationships and characters, CRA just throws women at Naruto, or whoever is inducted in CRA. "Oh no, I like her, but I also like her? What should I do? Wow, I am so happy that my family is dead, now I can have both of them in CRA!" Yeah, that is basically what I see when someone uses CRA. Second of all, CRA is not some universal rule. First of all, that is just fandom, so why does it seem to follow Naruto around wherever he goes, even another dimension. For example, Naruto goes to the Percy Jackson universe, which is obviously monogamous. Then the author ruins the story by talking about Naruto having two clans he needs to restore, so he is excused to fuck whatever woman he wants for babies. CRA just ruins a story. It is a crutch, and it needs to go.

Gods/Goddesses: I don't like it when writers use Gods and Goddesses only in Naruto fanfics as a plot device. Let's face it, the shinobi world is fucked up as it is, if there truly was some sort of deity for that world, then that deity is doing a really poor job in their land. There has never been mention of a God or Goddess other than the Shinigami in Naruto, and even then that could have been a communication error for a catalyst of an Uzumaki Seal. If that truly was the God of Death, then it wouldn't have been so simple to take souls back from it, especially with a mask that happens to control the Shinigami that had been lying around. The only true godlike figure in the entire series until now was the Shinju, the progenitor of chakra, and subsequently Kaguya, who basically is the Shinju. Don't bring any other God or Goddess into Naruto fanfics, especially some bullshit about Kami or Yami or some other Shinto Deity giving Naruto a second chance. They never cared about him before, so why start now?

Dead Demon Consuming Seal (Shiki Fuin): If there is something that I have been seeing more and more often in fanfiction, it is the complete trump card that is the Shiki Fuin. First, let me tell my theory about it. This seal does not really summon the Shinigami. First, I do not believe that there are any deities in Naruto (my rant above), except maybe Kaguya. In that case, the Shinigami cannot exist. Second, outside of what is related to this seal, the Shinigami does not exist. Third, the Shiki Fuin was created by the Uzumaki clan. Does this mean that the Shinigami was also created by the Uzumakis? No! Lastly, the power of the Shiki Fuin is dependent on the caster, and not that of a god. If the Shinigami really was present in the seal, then the Sandaime Hokage should have had no problem in sealing away Orochimaru, instead of just his hands. So when I read a fanfiction where Madara, the Juubi, or even Kaguya is defeated because Naruto uses the Shiki Fuin? No, just no.

Favorite Pairings
Note: These pairings are not necessarily romantic ones, they can include platonic, familial, or even rival-like relationships.

1. Teresa x Clare: This is probably my number one favorite pairing. Teresa is the strong and emotionally stunted one, while Clare tries her best to make Teresa see the other side of life. This is drastically cut short when Teresa is killed, and Clare spends the rest of her life trying to avenge her. This mother/daughter dynamic touches me for some reason, especially Teresa's conversion. It took Clare falling off of a cliff and then collapsing from dehydration before she actually acknowledged Clare and took her in. I used a rough sketch of this relationship for two of my stories, and I hope to write a story that has a relationship between two characters that is similar to this relationship.

Story Pictures

Blurred Lines
Naruto Awakened Link 1 - No Armor or mask
Naruto Awakened Link 2 - No Armor or mask

The Immortal Fox Lord
Kurama

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Ideas reviews
After the debacle of the last story, I decided to pen my story ideas one at a time and see what you all think about it. If a story becomes popular enough, I'll turn it into a full length one.
Crossover - Naruto & Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,460 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 32 - Published: 11/15/2015
Embodiment of Desire reviews
Three women could claim me as their child. The first saw me as her child, and loved me for it. The second also saw me as her child, but also viewed me as a means to an end. The last only saw me as an abomination. People saw me as a weapon, enemies as a monster. Should I hate them? No. Ants are not worth the effort to hate. Naruto/PJO/Black Rock Shooter
Crossover - Naruto & Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 16,340 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 112 - Follows: 133 - Updated: 9/22/2015 - Published: 9/6/2015 - Naruto U.
Embodiment of Desire BTS reviews
Behind the Scenes info of Embodiment of Desire. There should be a new BTS chapter for every new story chapter.
Crossover - Naruto & Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,778 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 9/20/2015 - Published: 9/6/2015
Legacy of Yin reviews
I had been alone, and now I am alone again. My dearly beloved family is dead. I fought for what they believed in, fighting for their ideals, never giving the slightest regard for what I wished. Now that I am done, what should I do? I have suffered, I have loved, and I have ultimately lost. Now these gods think that they can control me? Control the Demon that opposes the Goddess?
Crossover - Naruto & Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,957 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 114 - Follows: 131 - Updated: 2/1/2015 - Published: 1/5/2015
Blurred Lines reviews
A boy raised in a way that no one should, much less a child. He is the Dark. A girl, hated for what she could not control, and hated for her inability. She is the Light. Light and Dark. What happens when these two extremes meet? What happens when they try and find solace within one another? Naruto x Claymore
Crossover - Naruto & Claymore - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 39,452 - Reviews: 222 - Favs: 486 - Follows: 521 - Updated: 1/6/2015 - Published: 3/1/2014 - [Naruto U., Naruko U.]
The Immortal Fox Lord reviews
I was always alone. Since the moment of my birth, I was set apart from other people. They come and say they are my family. That they love me. That they care for me, and that they want my forgiveness. What is there to forgive? What is forgiveness? What do they want from me? They confuse me. Humans confuse me. Is it good that I myself am not human? Is it good that I am alone?
Crossover - Naruto & Claymore - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 22,379 - Reviews: 128 - Favs: 441 - Follows: 464 - Updated: 12/16/2014 - Published: 3/8/2014 - Naruto U., Kyuubi/Kurama
Forsaken Legend reviews
I am alone. I was beaten. I lost my innocence. Why? Why did this happen? Why am I different. I will not stay down. I will always get back up. I will be the best. Pairings Undecided. Powerful!Naruto. Serious!Naruto
Crossover - Naruto & High School DxD/ハイスクールD×D - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,751 - Reviews: 71 - Favs: 199 - Follows: 234 - Updated: 7/15/2014 - Published: 11/10/2013 - Naruto U.
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