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Joined 10-21-14, id: 6226248, Profile Updated: 05-08-17
Author has written 4 stories for Vocaloid.

UPDATE 05/08/2017: Hey guys, since Fanfiction.net is continuing to have problems with notifications, I thought I'd update this here for people wondering about what is going on because they're not getting notification e-mails anymore!

So first off, I did skip a week. Apparently I picked the wrong week, because the very next week the site stopped sending out e-mail notifications. We're crossing over a week of this flaw and nobody is successfully receiving e-mails about updated stories. This is obviously not great for us since I assume MOST people don't come to FF.net every single day! I did notice a spike at the usual update time even before I sent out the manual PMs to my followers, so I can at least assume most of you know to come by every other Friday. That will not be changing!

So I will of course continue updating stories on FFN for the forseeable future. My only concern is that, if the site starts to become abandoned, I will have a harder time reaching the long time readers, so here's the game plan if that happens. I already post every chapter to DeviantArt, Archive of Our Own, and Wattpad as well as this site, so if for some reason Fanfiction goes down, don't panic! Just go to one of those sites and look for "Rebochan" and you will still be able to read the chapters and yes I do actually update on all four of these sites at the same time! DeviantArt and Wattpad also have proper dashboards for mass notifying followers, so I try to post updates on those sites when something major happens. I will also try and keep my Tumblr at least updated with news when it happens - and that is ALSO a "rebochan" username (you'll know it's mine because Kaito is plastered all over it XD)

Hopefully FFN gets on top of those problems, but even if they don't, the stories are not going to come to an end because of them. I will keep writing for Kaito, like always =D


This account pretty much just exists for me to churn out Vocaloid fics. I haven't written anything on my main Rebochan account though, so you're still in the right place!

If the username isn't a dead give away, I'm pretty much devoted to Kaito. Love, love, love this guy, enough that I don't really care that I'm a woman in my early thirties writing about the mascot of a piece of software. I tend to see fanfiction as a fun way to meet like-minded fans, and also as a way to practice my writing without as much pressure as I'd need if I were writing original fiction. I also tend to trend towards stories with a strong female lead and a male lead with some sort of supernatural orientation or affliction. "The Vocaloids go shopping" is a story I just can't write because it has a lot less magic duels and helicopter explosions than I can handle! Maybe if a helicopter crashed and like... werewolves ran out out of the helicopter... while the Vocaloids were just trying to go shopping?

(Note to self: Must write "Helicopter Werewolf Shopping Date!")

I didn't start out in this fandom as a "shipper" and I still don't really see myself as one. While so far I primarily write stories with Miku x Kaito, I like to read a variety of stories and I'm open to other pairings - even unconventional ones! Just because I don't, say, write a KaiMei tale, doesn't mean I won't be interested in reading yours. Part of the fun for me in this fandom is the characters are gigantic blank slates and I love seeing what other song writers, artists, and writers interpret the same people to be.

I also like to write characters that contrast off of each other, each providing some personality trait that plays off the other members in the cast. I suspect I often read the Vocaloids with very different personalities than others, but I like to come up with the story first and then slot characters into roles second. Then I move them around the metrics I already personally read into their personalities.

Vocaloid couples I particularly enjoy:

Kaito x Miku: I actually didn't start out in this fandom with any attachment to a pairing at all. But once I invested myself in writing a novel-length Beauty and the Beast adaptation where I as an author had to invest myself in them as not just a couple, but a couple in an adaptation of a timeless love story... it's very hard for me to write them apart. I tend to write Kaito as a softer personality and Miku as a ball of energy - to some extent, I think I may still be inspired by Usagi and Mamoru from Sailor Moon. With a much more emotionally accessible Mamoru and a less klutzy and brainless Usagi... but still with a heroic girl chasing after the guy that got in over his head. Luka x Gakupo: AKA Lukapo (because it is fuuuuun to say). I'm currently working on two different stories with this pairing, even though my first fanfic has them as mortal enemies. I like the contrast of Gakupo as a very intense personality versus Luka as a more level-headed but still action-oriented personality. They come off to me as the more adult, subtle romance to Kaito and Miku, who tend to come off like two people that are less experienced in love. Though even this can vary as I play with the story. Kaito x Gakupo: I haven't written these guys yet and I'm not sure I can come up with a good story for them given my current investment in Kaito and Miku stories, but they're pretty interesting foils for each other and I love reading other people's works about them. They have another nice contrast with Kaito as the more happy-go-lucky type and Gakupo as the suave, take-charge type.

You might have noticed a lack of Rin x Len. So, I literally cannot write these two as a couple and while I've read a few stories of them AS a couple that I liked, I still cannot get invested in them. I have actually tried to plot out a story where they are explicitly a couple, and it fell apart until I switched them back to siblings and just wrote about their familial love. Maybe some day I'll change my mind, but I already wrote one Beauty and the Beast story, it's not going to happen again ;)

So I've been asked off and on for writing advice, and I thought I'd throw out a few general observations based on my reads through Vocaloid fanfiction:

  1. Nothing, but NOTHING, will turn me off your story faster than seeing things like "Miku POV" and "Luka POV" to show a transition. Guys... you don't have to do this. Your readers are pretty smart - as long as you write a solid transition from one person's perspective to another, you don't need to declare it in such a jarring manner. They'll know. Personally, I get around it with a line graph and a clear sentence or two at the start of the transition paragraph to show who's perspective I'm in, though I did once use song lyrics to show Miku and Kaito each having different thoughts in the same scene.
    Here's an example:

    Miku ate a spring onion. It was yummy. Spring onions were her favorite food!


    Kaito watched Miku eat the spring onion and thought about how they look so much like leeks.

    See? Not too rough. It's very clear who's perspective you're viewing, and you didn't have to yank the reader out of the story to tell them. Though I wouldn't recommend doing it in the middle of a sentence :)

  2. The Vocaloids are in high school! Okay, I do still occasionally read these... but... there's so many of these stories. I literally moved Miku and her friends to college age in a story just to be able to write a modern-era fanfic where they weren't in high school. I recognize that a lot of you budding writers are still in high school and you're writing what you know - that's cool! But a lot of "Vocaloids in High School!" stories are very samey.
  3. Grammar and spelling. Vocaloid fans are all over the world - and that's great! I've met so many interesting people who don't speak English as a first language, and that's made me so happy that I'm able to reach out to other people around the world like that! But that makes it all the more important to make sure your story written in your language of choice is as clear and clean as possible. If you're writing in English and you know your English isn't great (yet), see if you can find someone who has better English and work with them. Telling a story that's easy and smooth to read can make all the difference in the world! And frankly, if any of you guys reading this speak more than one language, I'm already jealous of you because I only speak English.
  4. Paragraphs. Please, paragraphs. I know, FF.net has kind of a crappy parser, but if the entire story is one paragraph, I will not be able to read it. Paragraphs are all about separating different thoughts. I'm terrible about making too many, don't do what I do ;) I'm really trying to get better about sticking to a hard rule of "Paragraphs must be AT LEAST three sentences unless you have a good reason not to!"
  5. Regular updates! I learned from good experience that if you tell people you're going to put up new chapters consistently on a certain day, they will love you forever. Fanfiction is notorious for being the work of people that had a cool idea, then dropped it. If you can confidently keep delivering content, everyone will love you. I will love you too because I too always lament that awesome story with that great hook that ended at Chapter 7 with an epic cliffhanger three years ago! This might mean planning your story out well in advance - and if you're willing to be hardcore like me, writing out several chapters in advance before you start posting the story! But it's totally worth it for building up a nice following (and regular readers! People who show up regularly are the best =D)

Okay, here's the real meat and potatoes: What the hell else am I working on? Well, these are subject to change, especially if they haven't started updating yet.

MY STORIES:

Vocaloid Tales: The Summer and Winter Garden: 10 parts. In a small village, Miku Hatsune grew up scared of "Demon Prince" tales. But the Demon Prince is real – Prince Kaito, a man cursed with a monster's form for breaking the fairy Luka's heart. When fate leads to Miku spending all winter at his castle, he and his ghostly knight Gakupo think they might have a chance to end the curse for good! But can shallow Miku come to love a beast? If it's not obvious from the description, it's a story of Beauty and the Beast with Miku and Kaito playing the main roles. My first Vocaloid story, it will always be close to my heart.

Broken Wings

Ever since the day a blue-haired boy with wings saved Hatsune Miku’s life, she’s never stopped believing in the existence of more people like him – no matter how much people told her they didn’t exist.

Now in college with her dearest friends and “Vocaloids” bandmates, Megurine Luka and Kagamine Rin and Len, she’s never given up hope on finding out what happened to the boy. When a blue-haired man turns up with strange gashes along his back, Miku immediately suspects the mysterious “Kaito” is connected to her mystery boy. Learning he has nowhere to go and nobody he can trust, Miku opens her home to the odd man, hoping that somehow he’ll lead her to answers. But right now, all Kaito is leading Miku and her friends to is trouble as strange beings with wings are attacking Tsubasa City with dark magic known as "Noise". A strange winged swordsman named Gakupo quickly joins their number, himself corrupted by the power of Noise, as Miku, Kaito, and her friends find themselves drawn into remnants of an ancient war that threaten to destroy the world.

Miku x Kaito, eventually Gakupo x Luka. No twincest.

Ran for 21 full chapters (the ending was too long!). I really need to get the elevator pitch on it down too, but its finally complete after spending 8 months on it.

Vocaloid Tales: The Nutcracker

It’s Christmas morning, 1816, and 16-year-old Hatsune Miku is eager to see what sort of presents her godfather Gakupo the clockwork toymaker and inventor has brought her. But when she finds a strange blue-haired nutcracker and receives it as a gift, she learns her new toy has a secret of his own…

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The Staircase Enigma by luckycarrot reviews
Luka has no particular desire to get tangled up in mysteries. It's her last year of school, she has other things to worry about. But the staircase soaked in crimson has come for her.
Vocaloid - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Supernatural - Chapters: 6 - Words: 36,118 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 7/2 - Published: 11/1/2018 - Luka M., Gakupo K./Gackpoid, Gumi/Megpoid
Frostbite by R. J. Niner reviews
The death of a charming teen leaves a small, isolated village in shock. At the same time, an old case resurfaces when a man with strange powers tumbles out of the cursed woods, remembering nothing but his name and the dead boy. With his help, IA, a detective from the city, has to solve the mystery, but the frosty village is hiding more secrets than she thought.
Vocaloid - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Fantasy - Chapters: 12 - Words: 29,650 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 29 - Updated: 3/20/2017 - Published: 2/1/2015 - Len K., Kaito S., IA
Beyond Sunken Cities, Beyond Unknown Stars by luckycarrot reviews
Through her skin, Gakupo could feel the faint echoes of the machinery inside her, the flow of energy that reflected in her eyes. They are synthetic beings, born in a world that turns its eyes towards the skies. GakupoxLuka, other pairings implied. Please expect dark situations.
Vocaloid - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 21 - Words: 97,706 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 7/29/2016 - Published: 1/7/2015 - Luka M., Gakupo K./Gackpoid
Prince x Wanderer by luckycarrot reviews
Kaito was once more running away alone...But this time he had the skills to take vengeance for his fallen family. Revenge would bring unexpected forces into his life, however. KaitoxGakupo. COMPLETE.
Vocaloid - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 81,933 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 1/25/2016 - Published: 8/28/2012 - Kaito S., Gakupo K./Gackpoid - Complete
Flower crown by Pineapplepie reviews
Gakupo is confident he's found the perfect time to confess his feelings to Luka. The only question is if she'll accept them. GakupoxLuka one-shot!
Vocaloid - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,115 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 3 - Published: 11/9/2014 - [Gakupo K./Gackpoid, Luka M.] - Complete
Christmas, the time for love by Pineapplepie reviews
The Christmas party was supposed to be fun, that's what was Rin thought. Somehow, she ended up sitting all alone while everyone else in the Vocaloid house danced and had fun. There was only one person she wanted to dance with, but he didn't ask her up. Instead, someone else did and suddenly, her night was turned completely upside down. One-shot!
Vocaloid - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,948 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/20/2013 - Rin K., Kaito S., Akaito S. - Complete
Pane Jya, Pane Dhiria by Katadenza reviews
"Sit down, child. Let me tell you a story, a story on how a musician managed to save the world..." One-shot.
Vocaloid - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 847 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/1/2013 - Kaito S. - Complete
A Merman's Song by Undercover Godmother reviews
I heard that it was Luka's birthday soon, and that vocaloidotaku decided the theme was 'Fairy Tales.' So I mashed together Vocaloid with The Little Mermaid. Gakupo is a merman with a song. Luka is the princess he falls in love with.
Vocaloid - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 35,724 - Reviews: 139 - Favs: 111 - Follows: 50 - Updated: 7/29/2011 - Published: 1/22/2011 - Gakupo K./Gackpoid, Luka M. - Complete
Cendrillon by Apple Fairy reviews
A story retelling of the song Cendrillon. The kingdom is one of despair and corruption, and the only thing Miku wants to is to leave it all behind. When she's sent to kill the prince, however, she finds someone who is exactly like her. MikuKaito Oneshot
Vocaloid - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,998 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 92 - Follows: 13 - Published: 9/27/2010 - Miku H., Kaito S. - Complete
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Flight of Cendrillon reviews
In late 1914, Miku Hatsune, a Cinderella assassin, is deployed to murder Crown Prince Kaito of the Estmarch Empire at a grand ball. But when the child of cinders learns the son of tyrants possesses a kind and just heart, she yearns to change his fate. Cendrillon flees at midnight... and fire consumes everything behind her...
Vocaloid - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 19 - Words: 183,439 - Reviews: 91 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 39 - Updated: 5/17 - Published: 2/16/2017 - [Miku H., Kaito S.] [Gakupo K./Gackpoid, Luka M.] - Complete
Vocaloid Tales: The Nutcracker reviews
It's Christmas morning, 1816, and 16-year-old Hatsune Miku is eager to see what sort of presents her godfather Gakupo the clockwork toymaker and inventor has brought her. But when she receives a strange blue-haired nutcracker as a gift, she learns her new toy has a secret of his own and she's pulled into his desperate flight from the evil twin Mouse Royals.
Vocaloid - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 96,678 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 2/17/2016 - Published: 12/3/2015 - [Miku H., Kaito S.] [Luka M., Gakupo K./Gackpoid] - Complete
Broken Wings reviews
When aspiring pop star Hatsune Miku saves an odd man named Kaito, she and her fellow "Vocaloids" band mates Rin, Len, and Luka are drawn into danger as winged people attack their home in modern-day Japan. Kaito, a song mage who lost his wings, and his friend Gakupo, a warrior tainted by dark magic, aid Miku and her friends as they try to stop the end of the world. Now complete.
Vocaloid - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 21 - Words: 174,037 - Reviews: 60 - Favs: 63 - Follows: 40 - Updated: 8/14/2015 - Published: 2/13/2015 - [Kaito S., Miku H.] [Luka M., Gakupo K./Gackpoid] - Complete
Vocaloid Tales: The Summer and Winter Garden reviews
In a small village, Miku Hatsune grew up scared of "Demon Prince" tales. But the Demon Prince is real – Prince Kaito, a man cursed with a monster's form for breaking the fairy Luka's heart. When fate leads to Miku spending all winter at his castle, he and his ghostly knight Gakupo think they might have a chance to end the curse for good! But can shallow Miku come to love a beast?
Vocaloid - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 10 - Words: 76,519 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 66 - Follows: 32 - Updated: 12/30/2014 - Published: 10/30/2014 - [Miku H., Kaito S.] Luka M., Gakupo K./Gackpoid - Complete