Hi,

I'm new to letting people read what I write, and I've not had much criticism on my work. I am in no way a professional at this, but I hope im not terrible. I am completely open to criticism and I hope that, even though I'm not looking for a career in this field, you will enjoy a bit of my creativity =D

I am a Brony, though i don't plan on all of my stories being pony related, a few of them will be.

I hope every one likes my work and if you don't, give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. I already deleted a story because all i was getting was hate and nobody told me what i could do to fix it.

Also, don't judge my story because "the character is too different, it's not how you would have written them, it goes against the show, ext..." i try my best to keep the continuity of the shows and events in mind, and i'm not the show's writer, and i'm not you so how i make the characters act (even though i try my hardest to keep their mannerisms and such) is my choice. that is the whole reason writers write. to get their ideas out. sooooo, please enjoy and critique my work and don't just bash it!