Hm... I'm a writing noob. The Land of Rivers arc is my first fanfic. Constructive reviews would be amazing help. How's the character/plot development, level of details, etc?

I'm in grad school. Secretly I really enjoy the Naruto series. I used to love Dagorhir, but I got tired of having so little in common with any of the other folks, hearing their perverted conversations and drinking stories, smelling their nasty tobacco smoke. I'm a realist, trying to determine how and what to accomplish. I'm also fiercely idealistic in my own defending people kind of way. I assume the best of people and am often disappointed.