I'm new to fiction writing, so please, if you see anything wrong don't hesitate to tell me. I've gone through enough constructive criticism in my nonfiction writing to not need anyone to be gentle. At the same time, if you don't feel comfortable with that, then tell me what I did right, so I can continue doing that! You're already here, reading this, so why not take a minute and help out a new writer?

Update: ARGH. SO MUCH STUDYING TO DO. To all my readers, people who have fav'd and reviewed, thank you so so so much for all of your feedback and encouragement. I haven't forgotten about War Bride, and I promise that when I can I will get working on the 4th chapter. Part of it is written, the rest is in my mind, it's just up to me and my schedule to let me sit down and write it all out. Once again, thank you to everyone who has shown interest in the story. I haven't forgotten about you, so please don't give up on me!