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Joined 07-26-11, id: 3106783, Profile Updated: 10-24-11
Author has written 8 stories for Make It or Break It.

Hey guys! Let me start off by telling you about myself. I'm currently in high school and I have a huge passion for writing. I always loved reading fanfiction, so I decided to start writing it too. So far, I love writing for fanfiction and I'm looking forward to sharing my writing with you! I hope I can make readers happy by writing my stories. I love reading and writing in my free time.

I usually balance my time with school work, writing fanfics and swimming. I was a competitive swimmer for 4 to 5 years. I quit last year, and now am regretting it big time and am trying to get back in shape for my first year on my high school team which is apperantly only Varsity because of it's small size. I'm sure chlorine is going to be the death of me because I practically live my life by different pools.

I also love gymnastics. I'm totally obsessed with Olympic gymnasts. I think they're totally cool and I promise you, if I could, I would be one of those commentator dudes at the Olympics. Which is probably why I love Make it or Break it. No matter how much I love it, if I could, I would probably rewrite the entire show with my take on it.

I am a total shipper for Payson and Sasha on Make it or Break it. The show sucks for not putting them together because they're perfect together! I love them to death. I guess I'm a sucker for all the romances that will never be because I also ship Kaylie and Damon. Yeah sure there's the girl code, but I loved them together. I also love Kelly and Austin together, which I still don't quite understand why. Lately I've been kind of leaning towards Nikelly and kaylicky, but Austin and Kelly will always be together in my heart.

I tend to get behind on my school work and swimming training, so I might slow updates down a bit. I also might start writing a different story if I hit a runt with the one I started, but I'll eventually get back to it. Hope you enjoy my stories as much as I enjoy writing them!

I do not own anything from any of my fics. They strictly belong to the creators, and not to me.

From my fic, Champion from Ashes

Chapter 3: Mackenzie (Payson's Fan)

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Right Now by Ksue reviews
Betrayal has a way of bringing people together.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 19 - Words: 64,885 - Reviews: 205 - Favs: 105 - Follows: 158 - Updated: 10/3/2016 - Published: 10/18/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
Identity: A Renesmee Cullen and Jacob Black Story by ytsgrl reviews
I can say with 100% certainty that my life is a life of uncertainty, as ironic as that may be. I am Renesmee Carlie Cullen. Only daughter of Edward and Bella Cullen. Half-human, half-vampire. I am best friend's with a werewolf named Jacob Black.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 101,936 - Reviews: 889 - Favs: 241 - Follows: 246 - Updated: 12/15/2013 - Published: 4/12/2009 - Renesmee C./Nessie, Jacob
Priceless by Virgo Writer reviews
No matter what it always came back to him – to the one person who had seen her at her best and her worst and found beauty in both. Who could put a value on that? Payson/Sasha
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 38,904 - Reviews: 102 - Favs: 92 - Follows: 156 - Updated: 7/22/2013 - Published: 5/24/2011 - Sasha B., Payson K
The Pied Piper by AlixM1234 reviews
Emily Kmetko - beaten and broken has lost both her dream and her man. But then someone completely unexpected shows up and has a proposition that could turn her life around. Well so long as Ellen Beals doesn't ruin it all for her. Set from 2.17 onwards
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 32 - Words: 116,965 - Reviews: 119 - Favs: 63 - Follows: 68 - Updated: 2/15/2013 - Published: 8/20/2011 - Emily K, Payson K - Complete
The Rest is Still Unwritten by LauraW89 reviews
Payson and Sasha disappeared after 2012 and for years nobody knew where they were, but what happens when they come back years later, only they aren't alone.. What will the gymnastics world think of this? Strong T-rated
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 9 - Words: 23,645 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 80 - Updated: 1/22/2013 - Published: 7/29/2011 - Sasha B., Payson K
Catch me by yasmine10194 reviews
Kaylie/Austin. Sometimes the bad ones have the best intentions. Life has a funny way of confusing the hell out of you. story following Kaylie's life and her relationship with Austin after her fall at World.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 10,064 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 39 - Updated: 1/16/2013 - Published: 2/25/2011 - Kaylie C., Austin T.
Love and Sacrifice by LDT5413 reviews
When Sasha Belov left Boulder, he left more than elite gymnasts in his wake. He also left a small piece of himself behind. Follow the journey of two people realizing their real dreams and the true meaning of love and sacrifice.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 39 - Words: 135,140 - Reviews: 192 - Favs: 72 - Follows: 102 - Updated: 8/20/2012 - Published: 4/18/2011 - Sasha B., Payson K
SixteenbyEight Feet by Virgo Writer reviews
"So good in fact we're planning on eloping. I will then move into the airstream, and if it is a boy we shall name him Sasha Junior," was her sarcastic reply. Who would have known that those words would come back to haunt her? Payson/Sasha drabble series.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 19 - Words: 38,294 - Reviews: 98 - Favs: 76 - Follows: 56 - Updated: 8/11/2012 - Published: 11/22/2010 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
Just a Number by Virgo Writer reviews
He was never her coach & she was never his gymnast. Now all that stands between them is the age gap...and the Atlantic Ocean. And gymnastics. And his reputation. Not to mention that noone thinks he's right for her. But age is Just a Number...right? AU
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 61 - Words: 196,925 - Reviews: 424 - Favs: 201 - Follows: 148 - Updated: 3/19/2012 - Published: 1/31/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
When Your Heart Wears Thin by Ksue reviews
Payson's life is in shambles, and Sasha is there to pick up the pieces.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 27 - Words: 88,034 - Reviews: 302 - Favs: 98 - Follows: 98 - Updated: 2/2/2012 - Published: 4/18/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
Someone like you by LauraW89 reviews
after worlds has ended and everything gets back to normal at the Rock, but Payson and Sasha won't be able to hide their feelings for long anymore, T rated for later chapters and just to be sure
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 17 - Words: 35,537 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 45 - Updated: 12/27/2011 - Published: 6/29/2011 - Sasha B., Payson K
Our Magic Number is Ten by Inextricable reviews
Payson is crushed after Sasha abruptly leaves The Rock and tries to deal with new emotions as everything around her changes. Can she bring Sasha back to the gym? How will she handle all of these confusing feelings that keep bothering her?
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 24,312 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 12/23/2011 - Published: 4/22/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
Recovery by alysunsparkle reviews
Tragedy has struck in Boulder, leaving many, including the infamous Sasha Belov, feeling lost. The journey to his recovery has begun. Will you take it with him?
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 8 - Words: 7,773 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 11/13/2011 - Published: 1/11/2011 - Sasha B., Payson K - Complete
Holding On by crayon115 reviews
Takes place after Worlds Apart Season 2 finale . Payson still loves Sasha, but knows he'll never love her. Still, she breaks up with Max. She wonders, is she right about Sasha? And maybe, could they possibly figure out a way to hold on each other?
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 28 - Words: 65,790 - Reviews: 53 - Favs: 33 - Follows: 48 - Updated: 11/5/2011 - Published: 6/24/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
What Lies Beneath by LauraW89 reviews
during season's 2 finale. There's so much more than what is to be seen on the surface.
Make It or Break It - Rated: K - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,261 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 4 - Published: 10/23/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
Maybe by alysunsparkle reviews
He says it isn't enough. Or does she? The back and forth debacle of whether or not two soul mates will end up together.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,789 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 10/15/2011 - Published: 4/22/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
Quidditch by Life's Crash Test Dummy reviews
"That kiss…all it meant was goodbye. To any and all possibility. That's it. The end." Kaylie wonders how Nicky Russo can be breaking her heart right now when it supposedly belongs to Austin Tucker. Kaylicky /Alphabet Challenge - Q/
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,809 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 8 - Published: 10/5/2011 - Kaylie C., Nicky R. - Complete
Tension by mind-the-apostrophe reviews
Four years after a heartbreaking Olympic loss, a TV crew catches up with the Rock Rebels for a primetime special. Thrown together after years of estrangement, the girls must confront bittersweet memories and buried regrets...on camera. Payson/Sasha
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 15 - Words: 35,090 - Reviews: 170 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 158 - Updated: 10/3/2011 - Published: 10/19/2010 - Payson K, Sasha B.
Getting There by Creative Dummy reviews
The sky looks like it's on fire, which only seems appropriate because this right here feels like they're dating, which means, yeah, the world must be ending. Nickelly :For Payson-Nicky-forever:
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,617 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 6 - Published: 9/30/2011 - Kelly P., Nicky R. - Complete
A Good Sacrifice by angel85qcca reviews
Emily doesn't know who to turn to after she finds out she is pregnant. But when someone offers you the answer to your every prayer, why should you turn it down?
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,217 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 50 - Updated: 9/26/2011 - Published: 9/9/2011 - Emily K, Austin T.
Because He Makes Her Mixtapes by beezyland reviews
There's something about him. She doesn't have to put on this I'm The National Champion, Respect Me show. She's just a girl sitting with a boy who thinks she has bad taste in music. Kaylie/Damon
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,316 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 3 - Published: 9/21/2011 - Kaylie C., Damon Y. - Complete
Lie to Make it Better by Virgo Writer reviews
Sometimes you're better off not knowing the truth. Oneshot.
Make It or Break It - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 948 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 9 - Published: 9/7/2011 - Sasha B. - Complete
After Worlds by poppetrussell reviews
After Rio, Sasha starts breaking down, and slowly a love greater than time unfolds...
Make It or Break It - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 8 - Words: 11,510 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 8/26/2011 - Published: 6/23/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
Before You Walk Away by Virgo Writer reviews
Kim had her chance to convince Sasha back to The Rock, but what if Austin had his? Austin/Sasha Bro-mance.
Make It or Break It - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,079 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 8/7/2011 - Sasha B., Austin T. - Complete
Second chances by 4eva-xo reviews
SEQUEL TO "SOME THINGS AREN'T MEANT TO BE OR ARE UNFINISHED". Nationals is now only a few weeks away. What will happen between Austin and Kaylie after her kiss with Brad? Will the pressure break up the best friends? Read to find out!
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 16 - Words: 36,801 - Reviews: 93 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 8/7/2011 - Published: 7/16/2011 - Austin T., Kaylie C. - Complete
Sit With Me Tonight by Ksue reviews
Payson and Sasha discuss her performance in Rio.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,555 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 8 - Published: 7/26/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
After all by LauraW89 reviews
Payson and Sasha never mentioned their infamous kiss again and ignore the lingering tension for years. But now, on the most important moment of her life everything changes and tension rises… COMPLETE
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,233 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 7/25/2011 - Published: 7/13/2011 - Sasha B., Payson K - Complete
A Drunken Night by BlueSkyHigh reviews
After an accident, Payson decides to make her feelings for Sasha known.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 610 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 7 - Published: 7/22/2011 - Sasha B., Payson K
Best Friends by purple2010
Things are threatening to tear apart their friendship, can Lauren and Kaylie save it?
Make It or Break It - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 579 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Published: 7/19/2011 - Lauren T., Kaylie C.
It Should Have Been Me by TargeBunny reviews
One-Shot I sat there and watched the whole thing. Every last second of Worlds from my couch and it killed me that I wasn't there. Kelly had taken MY spot. It should have been me up on that podium but it wasn't.
Make It or Break It - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 950 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/10/2011 - Emily K - Complete
Those Two Words by Virgo Writer reviews
In less than 24 hours she would be leaving Boulder – who knew for how long. What was there to lose? Post-2012 Payson/Sasha
Make It or Break It - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,751 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 6/8/2011 - Published: 4/16/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
Mission Impossible by LDT5413 reviews
He thought that by leaving Boulder he was protecting her, but one phone call will change that outlook. After an accident leaves Payson fighting for her life, will Sasha finally have the courage to face what he's known all along?
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 52,217 - Reviews: 79 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 63 - Updated: 5/24/2011 - Published: 3/6/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
Yours to Keep by Ksue reviews
Ever since Sasha gave Payson his medal, it's been hers to keep. Post-Hungary Heart.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,200 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 7 - Published: 5/10/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
You were wrong, Sasha, I do love you as a man by anagori reviews
I was disappointed at how the "Edge of the Worlds" episode ended – personally I thought the Payson-Sasha storyline was fantastic! Here's my version of the events after Sasha left. Your comments are very welcome and if you like it I'll continue to write.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 23,321 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 4/27/2011 - Published: 11/29/2010 - Sasha B., Payson K
The Things We Left Behind by Virgo Writer reviews
When Sasha Belov ran away, he didn't do it by halves – this was a man who didn't want to be found, but somehow she always brought him back. And although she may have his heart, gymnastics would always have his soul. Payson/Sasha
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,484 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/26/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
Permissible by Virgo Writer reviews
Darby knew what she was getting into when she came to The Rock and, like it or not, there was just one thing that she couldn't condone. Post-Free People. Implied Payson/Sasha.
Make It or Break It - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,174 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 4 - Published: 4/7/2011 - Payson K - Complete
For You, The World by Ksue reviews
Sasha would do anything for Payson, including leave.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 49 - Words: 163,369 - Reviews: 417 - Favs: 153 - Follows: 69 - Updated: 4/4/2011 - Published: 12/3/2010 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
Keep Fishing by Virgo Writer reviews
She felt it every time. And it didn't take a genius to know that he felt it too . . . Payson/Sasha. One-shot.
Make It or Break It - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 940 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 2 - Published: 1/21/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
His Life by LDT5413 reviews
Sasha reflects on his years at the Rock when he is finally married with a wife and child.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 14 - Words: 41,246 - Reviews: 44 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 10/31/2010 - Published: 8/25/2010 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
If You Go, I Go by erinjoy29 reviews
Sasha plans to leave Boulder. After finding the letter he left her, Payson won't let him go. Before he knows it, his sanctuary in Cambria has been invaded by an extremely determined Payson Keeler, who claims she won't be going anywhere without him.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,774 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 57 - Updated: 9/19/2010 - Published: 9/15/2010 - Sasha B., Payson K
Truly Beautiful by erinjoy29 reviews
Payson doesn't think she has what it takes to be an artistic gymnast. She feels like The Hulk. Can Sasha make her realise how beautiful she truly is?
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,190 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 11 - Published: 9/3/2010 - Sasha B., Payson K - Complete
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Romeo and Juliet reviews
"Romeo and Juliet were made for each other, but does nature give them a happy Cinderella ending? It's possible we're meant to be. You just have to believe it is." Kaylie/Damon
Make It or Break It - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,883 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 1/2/2012 - Kaylie C., Damon Y. - Complete
Champion from Ashes reviews
Nationals changed everything. Having lost her way, Payson turns to the only person she has ever loved to help her find her way back to reality. A story about love and what it means to be a true champion... Payson/Sasha Kaylie/Austin Kaylie/Nicky and more.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 8 - Words: 26,991 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 11/1/2011 - Published: 8/16/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
Recipe for Disaster reviews
She was the most decorated athlete in the history of gymnastics. She was the an expert when dealing with their Rock Rebels. She was a loving wife to her cocky husband. She was not, however, the smartest or most coordinated person to be with in a kitchen.
Make It or Break It - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,359 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 7 - Published: 10/30/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
Set It Free reviews
All Kelly Parker has ever wanted was a true friend. Now, is keeping the DL on Payson's forbidden love worth her one true wish?
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,581 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/1/2011 - Payson K, Kelly P. - Complete
One Chance reviews
One quiet night at the gym. One moment of realization. One chance to make everything right...
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,255 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/26/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B. - Complete
Come Back to Me reviews
"Come back to me," she murmered. "I can't." Payson Keeler never takes no for an answer. Payson Keeler never goes down without a fight. She was not going to let the man she loved hide out like a coward. This was a fight she did not intend on losing.
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,959 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 10 - Published: 9/11/2011 - Payson K, Sasha B.
My Heart is Yours reviews
Her heart always belonged to him, whether he wants it or not... Takes place after Worlds. Payson/Sasha
Make It or Break It - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 22,912 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 8/27/2011 - Published: 7/28/2011 - Sasha B., Payson K
Life isn't Always Fair reviews
When looking from the outside Kaylie had the perfect life, but did she always feel that way?
Make It or Break It - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/29/2011 - Kaylie C. - Complete