WhenTheDeadLieDown
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Joined 03-12-14, id: 5585740, Profile Updated: 10-18-14
Author has written 4 stories for Metal Gear, Five Nights at Freddy´s, Game X-overs, and Naruto.
  1. (The Basic Welcoming and Introduction)

Hello, I'm DeadLies, I like doing fanfictions and reading them, I only read a few, however, for my personal reasons, but anyway, we should get to the point as of now.

I will appreciate constructive criticism, but if you flame, I will ignore it, if you have no reason on why you hate a fanfiction of mine, I will ignore it, because that wouldn't even make the reader improve at all, (Seriously people, why would you complain when you don't give reasons for said complained about to improve?)

(Annoucements and Fanfiction Statistics)

I am making a poll, to either create a new fanfiction or make something new into one of my fanfictions, specifically the Big Boss one, the annoucement and details are at the second chapter of my Big Boss fanfiction.

(Review System, Chances of I Reviewing)

I mainly review only if I find the story interesting and that the grammar/vocabulary is good, I don't want a massive block of words though, just carefully place them and I will praise you for it, however meanwhile doing that I will point out the flaws, that way you can work around it and improve dramatically on it, I may drop a review if the grammar is bad but the plot is good and the other way round, I will almost never review shipping fanfictions.

(How my Format works in a Fanfiction)

Sometimes I use * for emotion, not as much as I used to do, sometimes I will bold some of the words that would grasp upon the chapter, a theory is that this would grasp the reader's attention, but this may possibly be wrong, anyway, I also sometimes do the person's actions first before how they speak and vice versa, mostly the actions first, but honestly I'm starting to slowly reconsider it if I were to be honest with you.

But here is a short example of how I do a move.

"RASENGAN!" Minato shouted, just after he had thrown a dagger through Obito's body as the weapon went through him, shocking the lad and cursing quickly as he then slammed the energy orb into Obtio's mask, slamming the weight down upon him into the ground, cracking the mask, as it had fell off into pieces, Minato's eyes widened at who it was.

The one who pretended to be 'Madara Uchiha' himself.

Obito.

(And a Whole Bunch of stuff about Me)

Who Am I?

I am the boy...that doesn't go to school dances, and when I do go, I stand around and observe. I was the boy that people look through when I say something. I am the boy that spends most of his free time reading, typing, and other things that are considered weird. (Unless you talk about Gaming.) I am the boy that people think that I am weird, I am the boy that doesn't spend all his time on MySpace, or talking about cars, girls or sex to his friends. (Are Cars really important yet? They are when your older though.) I am the boy that hasn't been asked out in a year...or ever. I am the boy that has stopped to observe the flowers when I have time to, and I even like the rain. (Sometimes.)

But I am also the boy who knows and is proud to be who he is, doesn't care if people call him weird (It's a compliment, don't fall for the trick they do.), who likes reading and typing fanfiction/s who can express himself better with ideals and words, but never seems to manage to do so due to having to not do it correctly, and knows the importance of the little things.

Be strong, never give up no matter the situation, and do crud lots of work, you'll get where you want to be in life, unless it's a extremely high one, but still, never give up.

Sincerely, A Epic Gamer.

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The Battle Never Ends by Kenchi618 reviews
Taught from a young age to fight for his village, Naruto thought he knew what combat was all about. In the chaotic world he now finds himself in it won't take long for him to find out that he has absolutely no idea. There are no heroes on the battlefield.
Crossover - Metal Gear & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 33 - Words: 386,714 - Reviews: 1946 - Favs: 2,342 - Follows: 1,932 - Updated: 10/28/2017 - Published: 5/30/2011 - Naruto U.
Iggy's Poison by Treacle Parcheesi reviews
Iggy Koopa is committed to a world-renowned psychiatric hospital after a suicide attempt. As psychotic and unstable as he is, an evil and even more insane conspiracy cannot escape his brilliant mind, yet it takes time, a little too much time, before he realizes he is already in the middle of its twisted vortex.
Mario - Rated: T - English - Horror/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 19 - Words: 68,492 - Reviews: 59 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 7/17/2016 - Published: 6/4/2014 - Iggy Koopa, Bowser, Ludwig Von Koopa, Lemmy Koopa
Mass Effect Reloaded by thebluninja reviews
Is a second chance enough? Instead of the Catalyst's choices, Shepard lucks into a cosmic loophole. Thrown back to the very start of her Spectre career, she has to try and save the galaxy again from the Reapers ... but does she really know what's coming? 2015 NaNoWriMo winner!
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 97 - Words: 335,916 - Reviews: 1844 - Favs: 1,762 - Follows: 2,050 - Updated: 3/29/2016 - Published: 1/19/2013 - Shepard (F), Garrus V., Admiral Hackett, Shadow Broker
Changing What is to Come by juman1994 reviews
Kakashi listens to Madara as he revels the truth behind the Massacre before finding himself back in time. Now he must come up with a plan to make a better future for everyone he cares about. By helping his team become stronger and bonding with his generation, will Kakashi succeed? Story of team-bonding, second chances and friendship. Team Minato Fic.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 22 - Words: 144,845 - Reviews: 766 - Favs: 1,452 - Follows: 1,634 - Updated: 1/28/2016 - Published: 7/6/2013 - Kakashi H., Rin, Minato N., Obito U.
Metal Guardians by CupOfAngst reviews
A young man, desperate for money, takes a low-paying job as a night time security guard at a family pizzeria. What he thinks will be an easy job turns out to be a struggle for survival when he realizes the robotic mascots seem to have a mind of their own, with a history of attacking the night watchmen. But he soon discovers there may very well be more to their motivations...
Five Nights at Freddy´s - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 8 - Words: 25,754 - Reviews: 306 - Favs: 821 - Follows: 640 - Updated: 8/8/2015 - Published: 9/2/2014 - Mike Schmidt, Freddy Fazbear, Foxy - Complete
Life Could Have Been So Different by Taranea reviews
Someone has died and Sonic finds himself unable to pick up the pieces. But when Mobius has already given up on its hero, Shadow drops in from a storm, intent on finding out whether there isn't a bit of spirit left. To coax Sonic out of his shell, the black hedgehog starts to tell him about his past...and what REALLY happened aboard the ARK. Shadow's childhood, now COMPLETE.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 56 - Words: 209,438 - Reviews: 1542 - Favs: 646 - Follows: 355 - Updated: 10/21/2014 - Published: 2/23/2007 - Shadow, Sonic, Maria R., Gerald R. - Complete
Fragments by Verran reviews
After the Mario Brothers bring Princess Peach home safely from her latest kidnapping, it becomes clear that not all is well. Convinced that they're all hiding something, Toadsworth, the princess's guardian, is determined to find out what happened. But as he discovers, some stones are best left unturned. Set after the events of Super Paper Mario.
Mario - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Spiritual - Chapters: 51 - Words: 84,736 - Reviews: 413 - Favs: 159 - Follows: 81 - Updated: 10/20/2014 - Published: 6/10/2013 - Mario, Luigi, Toadsworth, Nastasia - Complete
The Hinata Chronicles by NeoKenshin reviews
"Game Over? What does that mean?" What does it mean when a lavender eyed princess learns her life really was just a game. Does she have what it takes to beat the game again? And just how will she play it this time? Hinata decided to Press Start and find out what the future holds! T rating for now, may change to M depending on how it goes.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 28,316 - Reviews: 115 - Favs: 308 - Follows: 425 - Updated: 9/2/2014 - Published: 6/7/2014 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
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Epic Rap Battles of Gaming:
"So.. Luigi, what did you want to talk to me about?" Tails had sat down, having a smile on his face as his whiskers lit up, "Oh, I was going to talk to you about SEGA!" Luigi stared at him with a mental frown, as he had looked at the table and quickly said something without thinking, "Really? SEGA? Those losers?"
Game X-overs - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 718 - Published: 10/29/2014
Signed By Metal Gear's Big Boss: reviews
I, Big Boss, am somehow writing this journal, because one time Meryl found it, I discovered it again during my fight with 'The End'. However, I like the term of Big Bosspedia better though, thank you for the suggestion.
Metal Gear - Rated: M - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 728 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 10/24/2014 - Published: 10/21/2014
Metal Gear: The Patriot's Last Breath reviews
"They've all passed away. Their era of folly is over. I'm the only one left, and soon.. I will be gone too.." Big Boss, the last of the patriots, faced his demise and death, and now had awakened as the young boy who is the Jinchūriki of the Nine-Tails, he had questioned his moral, his beliefs and everything he's done, and now, he wanted to not cause the Patriot events again.
Crossover - Metal Gear & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,000 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 10/23/2014 - Published: 9/15/2014 - B. Boss, Naruto U.
Five Nights: Accepting the Pain reviews
He was once a happy person, a normal man, who had feelings of care, before he had been exposed to the truth, as Schmidt had dived deeper and deeper, not even knowing that he was becoming more and more cold and was ultimately changing, the question though, was that, how would he truly accept his childhood pain and leave it behind?
Five Nights at Freddy´s - Rated: M - English - Horror/Crime - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,099 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 10/17/2014 - Published: 10/9/2014 - Mike Schmidt, Phone Guy, Golden Freddy, OC