![]() Author has written 4 stories for Metal Gear, Five Nights at Freddy´s, Game X-overs, and Naruto.
Hello, I'm DeadLies, I like doing fanfictions and reading them, I only read a few, however, for my personal reasons, but anyway, we should get to the point as of now. I will appreciate constructive criticism, but if you flame, I will ignore it, if you have no reason on why you hate a fanfiction of mine, I will ignore it, because that wouldn't even make the reader improve at all, (Seriously people, why would you complain when you don't give reasons for said complained about to improve?) (Annoucements and Fanfiction Statistics) I am making a poll, to either create a new fanfiction or make something new into one of my fanfictions, specifically the Big Boss one, the annoucement and details are at the second chapter of my Big Boss fanfiction. (Review System, Chances of I Reviewing) I mainly review only if I find the story interesting and that the grammar/vocabulary is good, I don't want a massive block of words though, just carefully place them and I will praise you for it, however meanwhile doing that I will point out the flaws, that way you can work around it and improve dramatically on it, I may drop a review if the grammar is bad but the plot is good and the other way round, I will almost never review shipping fanfictions. (How my Format works in a Fanfiction) Sometimes I use * for emotion, not as much as I used to do, sometimes I will bold some of the words that would grasp upon the chapter, a theory is that this would grasp the reader's attention, but this may possibly be wrong, anyway, I also sometimes do the person's actions first before how they speak and vice versa, mostly the actions first, but honestly I'm starting to slowly reconsider it if I were to be honest with you. But here is a short example of how I do a move. "RASENGAN!" Minato shouted, just after he had thrown a dagger through Obito's body as the weapon went through him, shocking the lad and cursing quickly as he then slammed the energy orb into Obtio's mask, slamming the weight down upon him into the ground, cracking the mask, as it had fell off into pieces, Minato's eyes widened at who it was. The one who pretended to be 'Madara Uchiha' himself. Obito. (And a Whole Bunch of stuff about Me) Who Am I? I am the boy...that doesn't go to school dances, and when I do go, I stand around and observe. I was the boy that people look through when I say something. I am the boy that spends most of his free time reading, typing, and other things that are considered weird. (Unless you talk about Gaming.) I am the boy that people think that I am weird, I am the boy that doesn't spend all his time on MySpace, or talking about cars, girls or sex to his friends. (Are Cars really important yet? They are when your older though.) I am the boy that hasn't been asked out in a year...or ever. I am the boy that has stopped to observe the flowers when I have time to, and I even like the rain. (Sometimes.) But I am also the boy who knows and is proud to be who he is, doesn't care if people call him weird (It's a compliment, don't fall for the trick they do.), who likes reading and typing fanfiction/s who can express himself better with ideals and words, but never seems to manage to do so due to having to not do it correctly, and knows the importance of the little things. Be strong, never give up no matter the situation, and do crud lots of work, you'll get where you want to be in life, unless it's a extremely high one, but still, never give up. Sincerely, A Epic Gamer. |
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