My name is Kevin Wales. I moved from England to the scottish coast 7 years ago.

I have just got the writing bug and want to write about my favourite show - Terminator : the Sarah Connor chronicles.

For anybody that has not watched it, they really ought to because there is a lot to think about in the series which contains everything for everybody, young, old, female, male.

Writing about the series means that I am delving in to a world that is very dark for all of humanity. Much of what I write about is probably only understood if you watch the 2 series DVD sets.

The beauty of writing is that you can portray what people are thinking. The series did this very well but of course not what can be put in to words - something that future technology might be able to consider.

Most of all, today 9 Aug 2010, I am uploading my amended story to take in to account all of the valuable information that you have given me in your critiques and advice - thank you very much.

Having left school and used my school education up to age 11, I was lucky enough to be employed by the post office and trained as a telegraphist. This later branched off in to worldwide telex (the first kind of communication after the telegraph with printed output - it was used by businesses such as oil companies, chem cos., you name it they used it - although quite expensive).

I can thank this experience in allowing my typing and grammatical skills to improve but "the big words" and "human emotional writing and experiences" is a very daunting thing to master. Some of the ladies on this site write great Sarah Connor perspectives.