I think this is the only fan fiction I will ever do. (Do not read the next sentence if you have not read the Divergent series yet) I felt that Tris wasn't supposed to die after all that she's been through and after all the lives she changed - especially Tobias's. Even though the sad reality is that these unfortunate things do happen and that I do not like that fact, I fully respect how Veronica Roth has made that part of human nature beautiful and real. I just have an idea here of a different ending.