Thought I would exercise my creativity bone by doing some anonymous writing and looking for constructive criticism.

I am taking a break from watching anime. Even though there is some genuinely great stuff out there, I get frustrated by very stereotypical plots and characters. Perhaps writing will satisfy some need for a deeper story? The hope is to be true to the characters and universes that they inhabit while pursuing fun and intimate story lines.

Not a writer by trade or inclination.