I just started writing fan fiction, "Metal Gear Solid 3: The Uprising" being my first serious piece. I also enjoy reading others' fics and reviewing them; giving some friendly writer-to-writer advice.

Anyway, I now have two fics, both in the MG universe. One stars Solid Snake/Raiden, and the other stars Jake McNeil. Look at the summaries below if you wanna know more. However, both will be taken off of the net as of September 7th; you want 'em, e-mail/AIM me. See below for details.

I'm also considering a Halo fan fic, but I'm not too big on the military jargon that they use; if someone wants to help, I'd be grateful!

And here are others I'm considering once I get to know the plots better:

"Deus Ex"
"Devil May Cry"
"The Chronicles of Riddick"
"Psi-Ops"
Any number of original fiction pieces

But for now, please review the two stories posted at the bottom. I could use the criticism, no matter how bad.

E-mail: rpacejr19@yahoo.com

Note: If you want to help me with any of the above fics (any and all ideas will be appreciated), feel free to send any and all ideas to the e-mail above or contact me via AIM at Ray AP19. Also, use these if you want either of my stories (see above) that will be taken off of the net. Both will be/are revised.