Name : you know as well as I do that ain't gonna happen

Age : 25

Gender : Male

Occupation : Currently a university student, Diploma in Architecture. Doing muh Degree now

Location : Somewhere on Earth in the Asia region

Favorite Genre : Harem,Vanilla,Romance,Action,Comedy and probably try to get more.

Currently Favorite Fanfiction: Bleach, Freezing, HighSchool DxD, Infinite Stratos, Maken-Ki! ( there's like 1... and I'm not even sure if it's moving on or not :/ )Muv-Luv, Negima, ( similar case to Maken-Ki! ) Sekirei and Vandread ( It's sad that's not much of this in here..it have such a good potential.. and a large one at that )

What I want in a FanFiction:

1.) Good writing as in storywise and the flow of it. It doesn't have to be so perfect but if you can do it it's golden and I don't care if I have to wait 1 week for a chapter..it's worth it.

2.) Detail scene or situation. Like an environment,give the detail such as sun rays, temperature, windy or not..these things can make the readers imagine how does it looks like and further improve the quality of the reading. If the story is basically Lemon then I want it to be not just FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK END. It's silly to write a lemon like that because a hentai manga have better expression that that. The Lemon need to have a bit more detail than that such as foreplay, positions, reactions. Occasionally kinky talks in the middle of the action is damn hot as well. Put in some rough action if it's suitable to the char involved.

3.) Facial Expression. Oh lawd please have this in your fanfiction. No matter how badass your char is you need to have at least a facial expression. He's not a robot. Even if he's a cold bastard.. put it in the other character like smirking, frowning, smiling wryly, worried expression, gloomy.. damn there's so much expression it's sad if i found a fanfiction doesn't even put them in it. My favorite is sweating bullets or breathing profusely..it's funny if you imagine a person doing this. Scared shitless.

4.)Romance..aah the good vanilla. Seriously this is very fucking hard to do because mostly you need some experience with this. Romantic or mushy stuff is very hard to find nowadays..if I found it in a fanfiction I'm reading and it's good, you know damn well you got a follower.

5.)Action. Please for the love of that holy and sacred, It's so sad to see people trying to make action scene that only have like 1000-2000 words.. the fight would be like 5 min...and it's not even detailed..you need to explain the impact of it, like effects.. i:e the grounds is vibrating by the sheer force of etc etc.. or thunder illuminate the sky as he trying to awaken his power.. or dark fog came out from his skin and whirling around his body creating a very ominous presence.. WE NEED DETAIL BOYS!! ITS NOT ABOUT 1 HIT K.O THIS IS NOT 1 PUNCH MAN A.K.A SAITAMA.

6.)Proper paragraphing..like seriously you make 1 line per paragraph it's fucking annoying or like 50 fucking lines per paragraph.. this is not a dictionary I'm not gonna be amused with a wall of text regardless if the content is gold.

7.)Proper usage of grammar and words. I can let it slide if the words mess up a little like your or you're but if you mess up so bad example like mixing the position of the connector, subject, verb and predicate..you know what gonna happen.

If you follow all of this points for a fanfiction you would get at least 10k words..and if your English vocabulary is above average.. I don't need to tell you how beautiful your fanfiction will be. Especially you get those complex and complicated words.. I suggest you go to thesaurus website because its fucking amazing if you want to gain more words in your brain.