hi, for Greg's missing, my first story... well weren't my personal best, i did do a ok job. i am just starting out and i was so excited well lol. i just kinda rushed! now i'm getting it more checked and more detail. i'm afaid that one of my reviewer's is wright. it was mostly diolog! well expect more from the other chapter! ohh now stuff about me. well this is me and my friend's acount, i (Jade) dont have an e-mail so i used her's. she uses our name mostly to review! she's so suportive! you can tell who is wrighting this, me jade. my friends name is sam!