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Sorry the chapters are short, I want to work on making them longer! Please leave any and all comments!

My first tv show script

One Truth, Thousand Lies

15 year old Campbell (Belle) tries to live up to her parent’s expectations while trying to keep a secret that could tear her family apart. Although some pivotal characters' names sound like fairytale characters, like Belle, Princeton and Snow, the life of this Belle, would not be in a princess story. Belle tries to keep out of trouble with her mother, while trying to keep the secret. The normal teenage drama of a party girl, with strict parents, and brothers to follow in the step of, takes a major twist as Belle must juggle the aftermath of discovering an unthinkable secret and the little one's that seem to appear along the way.