Hi! Fritzfiddles here. Not entirely sure if I'm doing this right, but...who cares? (if you care, do tell--I don't mean to disrespect anyone's opinion in any way, shape, or form) I'm a amateur authoress, highly uneducated (though I do love to read and analyze things) and looking to garner more experience by borrowing (with respect to the rightful owners and authors) the characters and settings of other writers. I want to learn, so feel free to give constructive criticism--and I will consider your advice with humility and gratitude. Thanks!