Opinions wanted. This sexy scene between Regina and Emma is part of a larger story that I'm playing with. I've never written smut of any kind before, so I'd like some feedback before I decide whether or not to include it in the larger story. Let me know what you think: if its great, if its okay, or if I should give up writing smut ;) I appreciate your time and comments.

Begins inside the diner the fateful night Emma and Hook returned from the Enchanted Forest with their "luggage." Tension between Emma and Regina goes through several transitions throughout the events of Season 4 which have been re-imagined. There's some Elsa, some Dark One Dagger drama, limited OQ & CS, some QoD, but most of all, SQ. *This is an updated Summary* Warnings inside.