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Joined 04-18-18, id: 10634177, Profile Updated: 07-02-19
Author has written 18 stories for PAW Patrol, and ARMS.

Hello, fellow fanfic readers 'n' writers!

My name is Not Important, my age is not by any means necessary to know and I am from a country that has people in it. And you can leave now. If you do, you won't read this part. If not ...

Readers, this is my profile that I shall use to share my thoughts and opinions on any completed stories that you want me to, or even on my own stories. Of course, I'll need reviews and PMs to be able to do these, so do message and/or read and review!

And for you, writers, I have a question: have you ever wondered what people think about your stories? ... Well, yes, of course. That's why we have reviews. But have you ever wondered what people think about what happens in your stories ... as they read through what happens in your stories? Think about that. When you have the answer, you know what to do. But if I'm wrong and you don't, just PM me. That simple.

It's simple, really; all I do is repost any other stories and put my T&O's in square parentheses ( [ ] ) where they would fit in the story. (Also, if you don't like my idea, then you are free to leave; not that it really matters to me, nor do I want any flies on my wall.) But if it is my own story, then I'll only post one version of it - the one with my thoughts.

If I am to do a multi-part story, I shall not post all of the chapters at once. I want to give any readers time to give me any (constructive) stick or praise about the story/stories; as a result there will be a pause between each chapter for you to kill me or uplift me as I get ready with the next chapter. I'm starting to be redundant, aren't I? Well, I'll just stop there and let you all be.

Current Stories: Adventures of the No-name Pup, Misadventures of the No-name Pup, Assortment of Substories in Previous Two Stories

Story Notes Right Now: Currently working on new stories.

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OC pups that have been invented by me

1.

Name: N/A

Nicknames: The Expert, Ko Taku Aroha (to Rererangi)

Appearance: He is an albino Bernese mountain dog. He has fur of only the colour white and ice-blue eyes. He is of medium build and has a long fur coat. He has a muzzle of medium length and hanging triangular ears. He also has long legs and a long tail. When he becomes an adult, he will be around 67 cm tall and will weigh about 44 kg.

Personality: He is a stoic. His face never twitches into a smile, nor does it ever become a frown. Most times, he is blunt and straightforward, but despite this, he can actually be quite the joker and make others smile with the occasional pun.

Traits: He is very intelligent and has the ability to predict what others will say before they say it. He is an amazing detective and, oddly enough, quite the charming pup. He also knows a wide variety of languages.

Strange Occurrences When Near Him: Every so often, his ability to predict what others will say will cause someone to faint.

Gear: A simple white pup pack and a white fedora. The pup pack contains a magnifying glass. His vehicle is a white cruiser that is identical to Chase's.

Ship Status: Rererangi has a huge crush on him. She has even admitted to being in love with him. It is confirmed that the feeling is indeed reciprocated.

2.

Name: Rererangi

Nickname: Rere

Appearance: She is also an albino. Her breed is a New Zealand heading dog. Her fur is solely white and she has eyes as green as poison. She is thin and has medium fur length. Her ears are semi-hanging triangular and she also has a long muzzle. Her tail is very long and so are her legs. When fully grown, she will be around heights of 49 cm and around weights of 25 kg.

Personality: She is mostly shy, but when someone she loves is in any bad situation, she lets her emotions flow. She is a loving pup who doesn't like to hurt anyone unless she or they [who she loves] are threatened.

Traits: She is really very energetic and can work or run for hours on end. She likes to help lost animals and persons find their way back to from where they came.

Ship Status: She has a huge crush on The Expert. She has stated herself that she loves him. It is confirmed that her feelings are reciprocated.

3.

Name: N/A

Nickname: The Criminal

Appearance: Yet another albino. He resembles The Expert in every way, except that he has red eyes and is (and will be) slightly shorter.

Personality: He is strange, weird and at times silly. However, he is able to drop the silliness when someone is being too stupid for their own good. He is also very friendly when given a chance, despite being the bad guy. He can also be fairly impatient.

Traits: He is exceptionally stealthy. It has been implied that he has escaped from prison multiple times. He is the only person capable of sneaking up on his counterpart.

Ship Status: He's the bad guy. Why would someone noteworthy have a crush on him? And why would he have a crush on anyone?

4.

Name: Pouri

Nickname: N/A

Appearance: A melanistic pup, therefore he has fur of only the colour black. Somewhat similar in looks to Rererangi, but is bigger.

Personality: Extremely possessive. What he has he wants to keep, and if it is taken away, he goes to any lengths to get it back. This is especially true about him and Rererangi. He also is frightened easily.

Traits: No noteworthy ones.

Ship Status: One-sided with Rererangi and very rapidly falling apart due to his desperate measures to keep her.


ANALYSIS OF SONGS USED (CAUTION! Listen Before Reading)

SAFIA - Counting Sheep

This song is about the fear of the night and the insomnia-like symptoms of this fear. It explores the side of what fear thinks as it invades someone, and what that someone feels as it happens.

I never make a sound
Fingers crossed I shut my mouth
Thoughts they're creeping through my teeth (creeping through my teeth)
Drip, drop, the night is loud
Silence seems to drown me out
Box my thoughts and give me some relief

I wanna let you down
Make you toss and turn around
Won't you give me what I need
I wanna let you down
And I'm always lost and never found
Won't you give me what I need

In verse 1 and the pre-choruses, the persona is fear-caused insomnia and fear itself. The lines 'Drip, drop, the night is loud/Silence seems to drown me out' is a clear case of an oxymoron, signifying that the silence of night is so frighteningly powerful when combined with fear that it almost drowns out anything else. The pre-chorus is explaining the motives of fear in the night. It tries to keep you awake, afraid of the dark and the unknown hidden in it.

Tick, tock, make me creep
Never ending, counting sheep
Never get no sleep (no sleep, no sleep, no sleep)
Tick, tock, make me creep
Never ending, counting sheep
Never get no sleep

The chorus has a switch of voice, accompanied by a switch of persona. This is about someone who is affected by fear-induced insomnia. The lines 'Never ending, counting sheep/Never get no sleep' insinuate that this person has tried everything to overcome the fear, but has failed. The odd voice leads one to believe that he has changed very much as a result of the fear of the night.

Do you know what the most frightening thing in the world is? It's fear.
Did you plan on going to bed in the near future? (No!)
There's nothing to worry about. You're going to be just fine.
But whatever you do,
Don't fall asleep.

The interlude quotes a few things from other sources, such as the almost blatant one from FNAF: '[But] whatever you do, don't fall asleep.'. This is another segment where fear is the main persona. It lists itself as the scariest thing in the world. In the line 'There's nothing to worry about. You're gonna be just fine.', fear tries to create a false sense of security for its victim, before quickly eliminating it in the next two lines. Fear is quite merciless when it comes to its victims.

Don’t drop the curtains down
Darkness is the whole surround
My mind is lurking at my feet (at my feet)
Criss-cross, the night is sour
Pupils fixed on every hour
Sunrise is the only thing that’s sweet

This segment reverts to the "affected person persona", and the way that this stanza is sung makes it sound like the singer is actually scared of the dark of night. The last three lines easily imply that the persona wants the night to end as quickly as possible, so that he can enjoy the pleasant sight of the light of sunrise after the horrors of night.

The following pre-chorus and double-chorus follow the rules of their previous respective analysations.

I wanna let you down
Make you toss and turn around
Won’t you give me what I need
I wanna let you down
And I'm always lost and never found
Won’t you give me what I need

Tick, tock, make me creep
Never ending, counting sheep
Never get no sleep (no sleep, no sleep, no sleep)
Tick, tock, make me creep
Never ending, counting sheep
Never get no sleep

Tick, tock, make me creep
Never ending, counting sheep
Never get no sleep (no sleep, no sleep, no sleep)
Tick, tock, make me creep
Never ending, counting sheep
Never get no sleep


Bastille - Send Them Off!

This song is about a person who experiences the problems of having suspicions about his sig. other being unfaithful and being jealous of this mysterious other person that she is allegedly seeing. He doesn't want to feel this way, so he goes to desperate measures to rid his mind of these negative emotions. It is seemingly based on "Othello" by Shakespeare, who himself succumbs to jealousy when he is told that his wife Desdemona is unfaithful.

It was a slight on my honour, so he deserved it.
But we're talking about the most brilliant mind this world has ever seen!

Just a quote from "Cosmos: War of the Planets" that Bastille felt could fit well here. He "wanted it to open up with a bit of slightly bragging, like call to arms", to set the dramatic tone.

I've got demons running 'round in my head
And they feed on insecurities I have
Won't you lay your healing hands on my chest?
Let your ritual clean
Soak the ropes with your holy water
Tie me down as you read out the words

The demons mentioned here are a likely reference to the jealousy the persona feels, talked about later. The last four lines are various rituals for an exorcism, based on the religion of the recipient of the exorcism. The speaker is so desperate that he wants to try them all in a desperate attempt to rid his mind of his envy.

Set me free from my jealousy
Won't you exorcise my mind?
Won't you exorcise my mind?
I want to be free as I'll ever be
Exorcise my mind
Help me exorcise my mind

An exorcism is the expulsion of a supposed malicious entity from a person or place. In this case, the persona is not possessed by a demon, or other spiritual entity, but rather by jealousy, which occupies his mind to such an extent that he feels like an exorcism is the only way out.

Desdemona, won't you liberate me
While I'm haunted by your ancient history?
Close these green eyes and watch over as I sleep
Through my darkest of dreams
Be the power to compel me
Hold me closer than anyone before

This stanza is a reference to 'Othello'. The first and second lines are a direct reference to Desdemona, the one accused of being disloyal (and the fact that the play was written by Shakespeare, centuries ago, hence "ancient"). The third is a more subtle reference; not many know that the phrase "green-eyed monster" is likely to have originated from 'Othello'. The quote, from Iago (who tricks Othello), is:
"O, beware, my lord, of jealousy,
It is the green-eyed monster which doth mock
The meat it feeds on; that cuckold that lives in bliss
Who, certain of his fate, loves not his wronger
But, O, what damned minutes tells he o'er
Who dotes, yet doubts, suspects, yet strongly loves!"

Set me free from my jealousy
Won't you exorcise my mind?
Won't you exorcise my mind?
I want to be free as I'll ever be
Exorcise my mind
Help me exorcise my mind

See above analysation of the chorus.

I should be thinking 'bout nothing else when
I'm with you, ooh
With you, ooh, oh-oh-oh
I should be thinking 'bout nothing else when
I'm with you, ooh
With you, ooh, oh-oh-oh

This bridge is another slight reference to the problem of jealousy that the speaker experiences. He feels that he "should be thinking 'bout nothing else", id est the fact that his sig. other is disloyal to him, when he's with her, so that he can enjoy himself.

Your mind exists somewhere altogether different.
It lives in a world where feelings simply cannot be defined by words.

The intermezzo is another quote from "Cosmos: War of the Planets".

Oh, oh
Set me free from my jealousy
Won't you exorcise my mind?
Won't you exorcise my mind?
I want to be free as I'll ever be
Exorcise my mind
Help me exorcise my mind
Help me exorcise my mind
Won't you exorcise my mind?

Above chorus analysation.


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He had no degree, yet they called him Teacher...

He had no medicine, yet they called him Healer...

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He won no military battles, yet he conquered the World...

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Zootopia: While We're Young by Dizzie HamHam Writer reviews
An AU story of Nick and Judy meeting each other as kids. Judy Hopps, a little bunny from the small town of Bunnyburrow and Nick Wilde, a little fox from the huge city of Zootopia. As Judy prepares for her play for the Talent Show, Nick's family plans their first trip outside of the city. So what happens when that trip is at the town of Bunnyburrow? Proofread by Batzz.
Zootopia - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 39 - Words: 343,881 - Reviews: 936 - Favs: 632 - Follows: 602 - Updated: 3/23/2018 - Published: 9/13/2016 - [Nick W., Judy H.] - Complete
Pups Go Spelunking by Griffin Stone reviews
When Wisp expresses feelings of uselessness, Ryder comes up with a plan to make her feel needed. However, when the plan goes awry, Wisp might really be Paw Patrol's only hope. Part 2 of the Wisp Saga. -Wisp bio is now on author profile-
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 7 - Words: 12,195 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/11/2018 - Published: 11/15/2017 - Chase, Rocky, Marshall, OC - Complete
Pup of the Forest by Griffin Stone reviews
Chase ventures into the woods behind Pendrake Mine, determined to find out if the pup Wisp thinks she saw was really Geo. Thinking he will find either Geo or nothing at all, Chase is wholly unprepared for cryptic clues about Geo's disappearance and the strange pup determined to keep Chase from returning to the Paw Patrol ever again. Part 3.5 of the Wisp Saga.
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,702 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 5 - Published: 2/25/2018 - Complete
Number One Pup by Griffin Stone reviews
Determined to prove her worth as the newest member of Paw Patrol, Wisp pushes herself too hard. It will be up to the Paw Patrol to rescue Wisp before her first mission... becomes her last. Meanwhile, Chase, Marshall, and Ryder hide a tragic secret about the origins of Paw Patrol. Part 3 of the Wisp Saga.
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 20,397 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 1/14/2018 - Published: 1/1/2018 - Ryder, Chase, Marshall, OC - Complete
Pups Save A Wisp by Griffin Stone reviews
During a mission, Chase becomes lost in the sewers! Will he escape? And what happens when he comes face-to-face with the Adventure Bay Wisp? (No supernatural activity, only canon-typical spooks.) Part 1 of the Wisp Saga
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,501 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 3 - Published: 10/21/2017 - Chase, Marshall, OC - Complete
Paw Patrol: Friends Right? by Cray-TCO reviews
Ever since birth, Chase and Skye have known each other and have become very great friends. But what happens when that all changes and they want to be something more? (LONG STORY)
PAW Patrol - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 11 - Words: 22,809 - Reviews: 51 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 10/2/2017 - Published: 2/14/2016 - [Chase, Skye] Rocky, Marshall
Just a Little Miracle by Autobot Lancewing Beta 06 reviews
During a mission, Rocky meet a pup who is down on her luck. As he tries to help her, he begins to develop feelings for her. He'd try to help her find a home, but she has an intense distrust of humans. What's more is that the other members get worried about him as they have no idea what he's doing.
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 13,563 - Reviews: 44 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 7/5/2014 - Published: 6/15/2014 - [OC, Rocky] Chase, Marshall - Complete
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Adventures: The (Second) Biggest Revelation reviews
When you meet two identical persons, it's likely that they are related in some way. So what about two pups?
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,468 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/31 - Published: 5/29 - OC - Complete
Misadventures: Where's The Expert Gone? reviews
After a strange incident, The Expert leaves and no one knows where he is. What'll happen after that is a mystery.
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,978 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/27 - Published: 5/23 - OC
Misadventures: What Just Happened?
In this story, I'll take you through the "important" things that happened in my previous stories. Have fun!
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,794 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/22 - OC - Complete
Adventures: Unorthodox Problem Solving reviews
What's the best way to beat a magician?
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,710 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/21 - OC - Complete
Misadventures: Something Weird
I can't really explain this one...
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,692 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/18 - OC - Complete
Adventures: Two Kidnappings reviews
When Ryder and Chase are kid/pupnapped, it's up to the rest of the PAW Patrol to find them. Or is there another way about it?
PAW Patrol - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Mystery - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,345 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/17 - Published: 5/15 - OC - Complete
Misadventures: Marshall and Everest
Self-explanatory title.
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,160 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 5/14 - Published: 5/12 - OC - Complete
Marshall: ARMS Up! Comments reviews
When Marshall wakes up in a unfamiliar room, he soon enters the amazing world of ARMS! Join him as he navigates this strange new chapter of his life. (Parody of Max waspace's story, read at risk)
Crossover - PAW Patrol & ARMS - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,455 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/12 - Marshall, Everest, Byte/Barq, Dr. Coyle
Misadventures: The Expert Gets Sick
The Expert comes down with an ailment. How do he and the others handle something like this?
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,725 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/11 - Complete
Adventures: Murder?
What are the consequences in the world of Adventures when someone is murdered?
PAW Patrol - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,235 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/10 - OC - Complete
The Criminal's Story
The Criminal. Barely known, but he has familiar looks and an interesting backstory. Do you wish to discover what it is?
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,148 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/8 - OC - Complete
Adventures: What's Going On?
Continuation of "Adventures". What happens when there's another albino Bernese mountain dog in Adventure Bay?
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,443 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/7 - OC - Complete
The Expert's Story reviews
The Expert. The white, stoic Bernese mountain dog. But how did he become the stoic that he is? Find out here.
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,129 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/6 - OC - Complete
Misadventures: The Chickaletta Mishap
After his first ever mission, The Expert does some crazy shenanigans and stuff. What could possibly be a mishap here?
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,932 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/4 - OC - Complete
Adventures: Mission reviews
Having just been accepted into the team, the no-name pup is ready to take on his first challenge. How do things turn out? Read and discover.
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,557 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 5/2 - Published: 4/29 - OC - Complete
Adventures: The Beginning reviews
A pup with no name meets the PAW Patrol and becomes almost instant friends (albeit oddly) with the pups. What lies in store for him here?
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,313 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 4/28 - Published: 4/26 - OC - Complete
Adventures of the No-name Pup reviews
In this rather improv fanfic, a pup with no name meets the PAW Patrol and becomes almost instant friends (albeit oddly) with the pups. Join them as they embark on adventures and missions together. Rated as such because I'm really paranoid. (Summary needs work.) WARNING: Stupidity ensues.
PAW Patrol - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 18 - Words: 30,226 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 4/26 - Published: 5/14/2018 - Chase, Skye, OC
Misadventures of the No-name Pup reviews
After his first task, The Expert has more mission-less adventures in store. Join him in this story as he goes through all the fun, problematic and crazy adventures along the way! (Even worse summary.) WARNING: Stupidity still ensues.
PAW Patrol - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 14 - Words: 24,797 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/17 - Published: 6/22/2018 - OC