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![]() Author has written 18 stories for PAW Patrol, and ARMS. Hello, fellow fanfic readers 'n' writers! My name is Not Important, my age is not by any means necessary to know and I am from a country that has people in it. And you can leave now. If you do, you won't read this part. If not ... Readers, this is my profile that I shall use to share my thoughts and opinions on any completed stories that you want me to, or even on my own stories. Of course, I'll need reviews and PMs to be able to do these, so do message and/or read and review! And for you, writers, I have a question: have you ever wondered what people think about your stories? ... Well, yes, of course. That's why we have reviews. But have you ever wondered what people think about what happens in your stories ... as they read through what happens in your stories? Think about that. When you have the answer, you know what to do. But if I'm wrong and you don't, just PM me. That simple. It's simple, really; all I do is repost any other stories and put my T&O's in square parentheses ( [ ] ) where they would fit in the story. (Also, if you don't like my idea, then you are free to leave; not that it really matters to me, nor do I want any flies on my wall.) But if it is my own story, then I'll only post one version of it - the one with my thoughts. If I am to do a multi-part story, I shall not post all of the chapters at once. I want to give any readers time to give me any (constructive) stick or praise about the story/stories; as a result there will be a pause between each chapter for you to kill me or uplift me as I get ready with the next chapter. I'm starting to be redundant, aren't I? Well, I'll just stop there and let you all be. Current Stories: Adventures of the No-name Pup, Misadventures of the No-name Pup, Assortment of Substories in Previous Two Stories Story Notes Right Now: Currently working on new stories. NOW ACCEPTING BETA REQUESTS!!! OC pups that have been invented by me 1. Name: N/A Nicknames: The Expert, Ko Taku Aroha (to Rererangi) Appearance: He is an albino Bernese mountain dog. He has fur of only the colour white and ice-blue eyes. He is of medium build and has a long fur coat. He has a muzzle of medium length and hanging triangular ears. He also has long legs and a long tail. When he becomes an adult, he will be around 67 cm tall and will weigh about 44 kg. Personality: He is a stoic. His face never twitches into a smile, nor does it ever become a frown. Most times, he is blunt and straightforward, but despite this, he can actually be quite the joker and make others smile with the occasional pun. Traits: He is very intelligent and has the ability to predict what others will say before they say it. He is an amazing detective and, oddly enough, quite the charming pup. He also knows a wide variety of languages. Strange Occurrences When Near Him: Every so often, his ability to predict what others will say will cause someone to faint. Gear: A simple white pup pack and a white fedora. The pup pack contains a magnifying glass. His vehicle is a white cruiser that is identical to Chase's. Ship Status: Rererangi has a huge crush on him. She has even admitted to being in love with him. It is confirmed that the feeling is indeed reciprocated. 2. Name: Rererangi Nickname: Rere Appearance: She is also an albino. Her breed is a New Zealand heading dog. Her fur is solely white and she has eyes as green as poison. She is thin and has medium fur length. Her ears are semi-hanging triangular and she also has a long muzzle. Her tail is very long and so are her legs. When fully grown, she will be around heights of 49 cm and around weights of 25 kg. Personality: She is mostly shy, but when someone she loves is in any bad situation, she lets her emotions flow. She is a loving pup who doesn't like to hurt anyone unless she or they [who she loves] are threatened. Traits: She is really very energetic and can work or run for hours on end. She likes to help lost animals and persons find their way back to from where they came. Ship Status: She has a huge crush on The Expert. She has stated herself that she loves him. It is confirmed that her feelings are reciprocated. 3. Name: N/A Nickname: The Criminal Appearance: Yet another albino. He resembles The Expert in every way, except that he has red eyes and is (and will be) slightly shorter. Personality: He is strange, weird and at times silly. However, he is able to drop the silliness when someone is being too stupid for their own good. He is also very friendly when given a chance, despite being the bad guy. He can also be fairly impatient. Traits: He is exceptionally stealthy. It has been implied that he has escaped from prison multiple times. He is the only person capable of sneaking up on his counterpart. Ship Status: He's the bad guy. Why would someone noteworthy have a crush on him? And why would he have a crush on anyone? 4. Name: Pouri Nickname: N/A Appearance: A melanistic pup, therefore he has fur of only the colour black. Somewhat similar in looks to Rererangi, but is bigger. Personality: Extremely possessive. What he has he wants to keep, and if it is taken away, he goes to any lengths to get it back. This is especially true about him and Rererangi. He also is frightened easily. Traits: No noteworthy ones. Ship Status: One-sided with Rererangi and very rapidly falling apart due to his desperate measures to keep her. ANALYSIS OF SONGS USED (CAUTION! Listen Before Reading) SAFIA - Counting Sheep This song is about the fear of the night and the insomnia-like symptoms of this fear. It explores the side of what fear thinks as it invades someone, and what that someone feels as it happens. I never make a sound I wanna let you down In verse 1 and the pre-choruses, the persona is fear-caused insomnia and fear itself. The lines 'Drip, drop, the night is loud/Silence seems to drown me out' is a clear case of an oxymoron, signifying that the silence of night is so frighteningly powerful when combined with fear that it almost drowns out anything else. The pre-chorus is explaining the motives of fear in the night. It tries to keep you awake, afraid of the dark and the unknown hidden in it. Tick, tock, make me creep The chorus has a switch of voice, accompanied by a switch of persona. This is about someone who is affected by fear-induced insomnia. The lines 'Never ending, counting sheep/Never get no sleep' insinuate that this person has tried everything to overcome the fear, but has failed. The odd voice leads one to believe that he has changed very much as a result of the fear of the night. Do you know what the most frightening thing in the world is? It's fear. The interlude quotes a few things from other sources, such as the almost blatant one from FNAF: '[But] whatever you do, don't fall asleep.'. This is another segment where fear is the main persona. It lists itself as the scariest thing in the world. In the line 'There's nothing to worry about. You're gonna be just fine.', fear tries to create a false sense of security for its victim, before quickly eliminating it in the next two lines. Fear is quite merciless when it comes to its victims. Don’t drop the curtains down This segment reverts to the "affected person persona", and the way that this stanza is sung makes it sound like the singer is actually scared of the dark of night. The last three lines easily imply that the persona wants the night to end as quickly as possible, so that he can enjoy the pleasant sight of the light of sunrise after the horrors of night. The following pre-chorus and double-chorus follow the rules of their previous respective analysations. I wanna let you down Tick, tock, make me creep Tick, tock, make me creep Bastille - Send Them Off! This song is about a person who experiences the problems of having suspicions about his sig. other being unfaithful and being jealous of this mysterious other person that she is allegedly seeing. He doesn't want to feel this way, so he goes to desperate measures to rid his mind of these negative emotions. It is seemingly based on "Othello" by Shakespeare, who himself succumbs to jealousy when he is told that his wife Desdemona is unfaithful. It was a slight on my honour, so he deserved it. Just a quote from "Cosmos: War of the Planets" that Bastille felt could fit well here. He "wanted it to open up with a bit of slightly bragging, like call to arms", to set the dramatic tone. I've got demons running 'round in my head The demons mentioned here are a likely reference to the jealousy the persona feels, talked about later. The last four lines are various rituals for an exorcism, based on the religion of the recipient of the exorcism. The speaker is so desperate that he wants to try them all in a desperate attempt to rid his mind of his envy. Set me free from my jealousy An exorcism is the expulsion of a supposed malicious entity from a person or place. In this case, the persona is not possessed by a demon, or other spiritual entity, but rather by jealousy, which occupies his mind to such an extent that he feels like an exorcism is the only way out. Desdemona, won't you liberate me This stanza is a reference to 'Othello'. The first and second lines are a direct reference to Desdemona, the one accused of being disloyal (and the fact that the play was written by Shakespeare, centuries ago, hence "ancient"). The third is a more subtle reference; not many know that the phrase "green-eyed monster" is likely to have originated from 'Othello'. The quote, from Iago (who tricks Othello), is: Set me free from my jealousy See above analysation of the chorus. I should be thinking 'bout nothing else when This bridge is another slight reference to the problem of jealousy that the speaker experiences. He feels that he "should be thinking 'bout nothing else", id est the fact that his sig. other is disloyal to him, when he's with her, so that he can enjoy himself. Your mind exists somewhere altogether different. The intermezzo is another quote from "Cosmos: War of the Planets". Oh, oh Above chorus analysation. Bye! Have a nice day! See you in the stories! Don't forget to write! Send a PM? Maybe some ideas? Alright? Jesus had no servants, yet they called him Master... He had no degree, yet they called him Teacher... He had no medicine, yet they called him Healer... He had no army, yet kings feared him... He won no military battles, yet he conquered the World... He committed no crime, yet they crucified Him... He was buried in a tomb, yet He lives today Feel honoured to serve such a leader who loves us... If you believe in God and Jesus Christ his Son then copy and paste this in your profile If you ignore him, in the Holy Bible, Jesus says... " If you deny me before man, I will deny you before my Father in Heaven..." | |||||||
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