![]() Author has written 4 stories for Kingdom Hearts, and Death Note. Hi, I'm DeltaFire. Some of my favorite games are Halo, Kingdom Hearts (which will always be awesome), Kid Icarus, Minecraft, Pokemon (the video game), Bravely Default, Phoenix Wright, and Yu-Gi-Oh (the card game). I'm very philosophical, which is probably why I can relate to Kingdom Hearts. I'm 15. I guess I'll work mostly with Kingdom Hearts, but I'm rarely going to present travel to Disney worlds. Most worlds are completely of my own design, and if you want Disney, play the game. I love feedback and criticism, so feel free to review my work, and I'll take your comments into consideration. Jason Weapon: Infinity Keyblade A 14 year old boy with little actual training. His power and base fighting ability is exponentially increased by the use of his Keyblade. Is tied into the events that happen around him, but his real connection in the big picture has yet to be seen. Kind of a nerd, and at times a smartass, but he knows when to be serious. Has overcome monumental tasks, but has also suffered great losses. Daxjra Weapon: Marrow Keyblade A Nobody with a scarred past, he has a scar running over his eye, changing the iris to red. His vision is not impaired despite this, but he can see through his eye with a Heartless perspective. He gained access to the superior's plan. He has complete trust in his friends, and seeks to right the wrongs that he's committed. Xerin Weapon: Knives Deceased A former Organization member, daughter of Larxene. Sadistic, yet cowardly. Died while fighting Daxjra. Tends to have mood swings. Forix Weapon: None that is known of, possesses mental powers. A former Organization member out for his own motives. He specializes in mental tactics. Likes to control. Trying to bend the superior's plan to benefit him and only him. Dux Weapon: Steel wings Daxjra's blood brother turned Nobody. Holds a grudge against Daxjra for past mistakes. Had a five month absence between becoming a Nobody, and joining the Organization. For some reason, his real name doesn't match his recusant's sigil. Derix Weapon: Hell-trident A strange Nobody with an incredible capacity for genocide, to the point of it being a hobby. Fights like it's a chore. Mental health is debatable. Can transform both body and weapon in times of extreme duress. Lagaulixa Weapon: Sword An emotionless Organization member. Little more than the superior's pawn. Is caught off guard by kindness, and oblivious to nuance. Chaxis Weapon: Bow The superior's right hand man. Expert archer and solid member of Organization XIII. A Nobody of few words who works hard to earn the superior's trust. Ebony Heartless Originally labeled The Queen, she now resides in Jason's subconscious through a keychain. Though a Heartless, she seems to bear no ill will towards Jason. Believes that the strong should overpower the weak. Kurai Weapon: Unbound Keyblade An expert duelist with knowledge of the Final Keyblade prophecy. Operates in Twilight Town, but doesn't seem to be a resident. Puts stock in nothing but his own Keyblade. Member of the Keyblade Army. No. X Weapon: Guns An Organization member who chooses not to use his name. Wields multiple firearms. Has two pairs of metal arms that attach to his body, acting as both caches for weapons, and extra trigger fingers. Often has qualms about his part in events, but doesn't deter from the path he's chosen. Kalex Weapon: Saw blades A female turncoat of the Organization. Friends with Daxjra. Expert hacker. A down to earth person with straightforward goals. Is often conflicted with grey areas, but always thinks her concerns through before voicing them. Raxadus Weapon: ??? The mastermind behind the Organization's schemes. Ruthless and sadistic. Has unknown motives and enough puppet strings to achieve his end goals. Weapon: ??? A red cloaked Organization member. One of the Three. Incapacitated Marco with a snap. Weapon: ??? A blue cloaked Organization member. One of the Three. Weapon: ??? A yellow cloaked Organization member. One of the Three. Marco Weapon: Shadow Jason's former best friend. Works under Forix for unknown purposes. Intends to betray Forix when he no longer needs him. Is an incredibly deadly fighter with superhuman durability. Can bend shadows to his whim in a tendril-like form, but the full extent of his power has yet to be seen. Kate A girl on Earth. Love interest of Jason, but unaffiliated in the coming war. An avid thinker with the nagging compulsion to know the truth. Wishes to be a help to others, and she often can be, but she feels paralyzed by the scope of the threat that her friends must face. Infinity Keyblade An ancient weapon and a Keyblade unlike any other. Possesses the ability to increase the users output in all physical aspects, as well as influence their ability to fight. Has the strange power to absorb multiple keychains, adding their power to its own without losing already existing abilities. Has long reach and scythe-like blades that allow for two different attack patterns. Prophesized to be the last Keyblade, but the details are shrouded in mystery. Marrow Keyblade: A somewhat different Keyblade composed of bleach-white bone. Wieldable by Daxjra and, in one case, Jason. Daxjra wields this blade with deadly finesse. Organization XIII: An organization comprised of now nine members. These members are the superior, Lagaulixa, Chaxis, Derix, Dux, No. X, and the Three. Former members include the deceased Xerin, and turncoats Kalex, Daxjra, and Forix. Their purpose remains unknown. The Three: A sect of the Organization comprised of three Nobodies. They are No.II, No.III, and No.IV, respectively, and they all wear Xemnas- themed cloaks with a different color. They are the strongest of the Organization, the superior being notwithstanding. Though not confirmed, the red cloaked one seems to command the other two. The Order: Though not as compact and capable as the Organization, the order seeks to uphold the world order. They have branches in many different worlds. They do research into anything concerning world order, including the Final Keyblade Prophecy. Concerned with the Omega Keyholes, but more for their own informational gain. Though order in name, the group has no strong cohesion, and with multiple branches, often resorts to argument. Hey guys. I wanted to say a couple things on my mind. First, I've been sort of upset at the massive decrease of viewership from Book One to Book Two, with the former having twice as many views, favorites, followers, and reviews. When I say this though, I want to make it clear who I blame for this. I blame myself. I blame my procrastination, and the time I took to actually begin Book Two. Even so, I'm still amazed by the number of people that view, even enjoy my content. When I started this, I never expected anything special, but now, I just can't say anything to fully contextualize my feelings. But what really makes my misty eyed, is those of you who stuck with me and still are even now, who never fail to read, review, and comment on my work. Knowing that there are people out there who find enjoyment in my stories, who actually like what I'm doing, that is the greatest feeling in the world. So, even though I dislike some of the choices I've made in Book One, I still respect it for being the foundation that I built this story on. But I was not the only builder. Those who watch my content, they are also worthy of respect. At the end of the day, not Daxjra, not Jason, not even Sora, is a greater hero to me than you guys. Thank you. New Plans: After completing chapter 13 of The Final Keyblade: Book Two, I felt I wanted to take a departure from the story for a while to examine thoroughly how to go about the next couple of chapters, maybe even the next installment. With that said, while I'm doing this, I'll be working on another book, to try out a new writing style. This story will contain elements from my previous stories, but I've decided to make the story revolve around DeathNote, rather than Kingdom Hearts. This being said, I'm not quitting The Final Keyblade, but I'll be working on both stories, so we'll see where it goes. The Blank Note Clyde A boy in high school. Smart, and good at forming deductions with a pre-conceived conclusion Steven A labeled genius by all but himself. Has fantastic logic and deduction skills, but has trouble forming a cohesive argument. Socially awkward. Sarah Friends with Steven, and a brutal debater. Can create a brilliantly formed argument, but has trouble following her deductions to a conclusion. I would like to note that a better version of my Final Keyblade series exists on Inkitt under the same name. Not all of it is submitted, but if requested, I will finish the entire trilogy there. Wow, it's been a while since logging on. Reading all the old reviews on my work gives me this sense of nostalgia about it all, and I feel so much appreciation for everyone who let me get this far. There probably isn't a lot of people who will read this, but I'd like to note that I've transitioned into writing mainly original works, and all that work is on Inkitt, under the username Daxjra (classy, I know). There hasn't been much if any progress on The Final Keyblade, unfortunately, though I may come back and finish book three if there really is a lot of desire for it. I don't think that'll be the case, seeing as it's been literally two years since I've touched it and the response doesn't seem to be that big, but it may happen anyway. Thanks for all your support, and I hope we cross paths again. |
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