Welcome to my profile, fellow Autobot/Decepticon fans. Lightning Prime has renamed herself as ToniMizukiPrime.

2010-2013 Journal: Rookie to Writer

Four years in high school...had become a girl who got so much imagination with Transformers and other shows I love...twisted together. I had been criticized on Fanfiction by serveral writers who I blocked...and they're still living. They were write on how I typed back in freshman year...but what about Senior year. I had been improved, I become mature, I had writing help by roleplaying and loads of fanart and all, and not a single criticism by anyone... Well, thieves apparently, but that's only on my trusted friends that are a second family to me. I been a rookie in ninth grade...I improved my writing up to twelfth grade, look at me now, and I never give a crap on peep's negative activity towards me with all my work. I just block them, the end, done. You're done reading or looking at my art, and that was just really simple as that.

Flamers will never win, because I'm like an Autobot rookie soldier up to and Autobot Commander.

This is Lightning Prime...Toni Mizuki... And I am who I am today as a mature young adult.

LP (Age 17)

How did I create Lightning? A deviantART Journal

Age 11, I begin to love Transformers alongside with my dad and brother. Primarily, My dad had made us watch the 2007 movie literally 50 times, and as for my brother, he had got me into my first TF series, Transformers Animated. I had watched every episode with my brother and also had bought my first TF toy which was TFA Soundwave...though as of that, my zone of a fan wasn't enough when I was twelve, so then that's when my art idea has came up. I originally created Lightning starting as a plain human...most likely me to be honest. Though I originally put her title as Lightning Prime. As all rookie fans are, I had my character as daughter of Optimus Prime, though basically labeling something else over to Megatron which was another character I created name Storm...still me. Lightning's color was orginally colors of Optimus and as for Storm, formerly same color as Megatron's. To be honest, in my past, I should have known better then that. Besides, I didn't know the information of series, characters, and locations that time. Lightning's original weapons were two knives and a sword, basically her role was a ninja, and her ability was lightning abilities. I made journals of her and Storm in seventh grade and shared it to my "so called" friends. I had to say that, because of how they criticize me on liking boy shows. When I was at middle school before all this happen today in the present, I always thought that I was the only girl that love Transformers...but then I was wrong when I hit freshman year.

When I came to High School, I had not drew Lightning for months, instead I been drawing so much anime. A TF series had not show up in that time I was taking a rest with my art., but then after I met my best friend, that is when a TF series came, which was Transformers Prime. As of that coming in, I started drawing more pictures of Lightning. Then near the end of my first semester in freshman year, my best friend had shown me Fanfiction.Net . In there, I go by my first character's name as my author name...plus my nickname. Though as soon as I put up my first fanfiction that was about Lightning, I was criticized. I got Lightning from human to techno-organic at that time and still hold of the same bio back when I was twelve. I still had known better, but I didn't listen to the people that were criticizing me with the character...if some people know who I mean. Anyway, the fanfiction was getting good and I met many new friends, making little roleplays and stories with them together. The more I made chapters of Lightning, I drew more pictures of her and post them on deviantART...which is the explanation on the user name lightning44.

Sophomore year, I had discovered roleplaying groups and accounts on here in deviantART and the first roleplayer I spotted was the roleplayer of Megatron. Me and my best friend were pretty much mind-blown that someone made that and I begin started on hopping along and roleplaying with other people on here, though apparently, people were being jerks around me except several. OC characters I believe don't be disrespected in my thought here. Met new friends here like Silverdo Prime and silverheart101. When I went to Facebook, I had my thought if there were roleplayers on there and they were and like deviantART, I jumped in, and Facebook RP highly respect OCs than deviantART RP does, so I leaned forward the most with Facebook and everyone had love my character Lightning, though in my thought when I had Lightning with an Autobot name Drift, I decided to modernize her even more, so she had went from Techno-organic to robot on there, and I had improve my art just a little and her form was more like Transformers Animated, and additionally, I still put her as Lightning Prime with her old holoform name, Connie. I had made Drift and Lightning together, been researching more and more stuff of Transformers, watch previous and previous of series even the very first Transformers movie from G1.

After sophomore year, I slowly dropped everything, I modernized Lightning even more, met more new friends, cyberbullies, retarded people, and smartass nerds, and she had sparklings, but in junior year, I deeply cut everything off. When I met my considered art and Transformers mentor, best friend, and sister figure, Ms Elita One, I begin making my character Lightning modernized even more. She no longer had that Prime title except for Transformers Animated, not the daughter of Optimus Prime, have her own team, have a new bio, is in about 3-4 universe in Transformers, Storm is her negative side except for TFA, Lightning has a shattered-glass name Chaos. She also have pairings as well. I also changed her holoform character from Connie to Toni Mizuki.

Usually back in the past, I had twisted Lightning with crossovers which was very wrong of me on doing that and real retarded, but as for like techno crossovers, makes more sense today. I been following the plotlines of the Transformers, and put in my character in the zone of my imagination that makes more sense than the past. And happily that I still kept this OC character up for almost seven years. This is Lightning Prime that told you this story on how I created my first OC Character, Lightning, Autobot Cyber-Ninja.

LP (Age 17)

Nickname: Toni or LP

Race: African American

Fan of: Transformers, Hetalia, Sonic, Happy Tree Friends, Deadpool, Dick Figures, Batman: TAS, Death Note, Red vs Blue, and Kirby

Most likely Transformers!!

Fanfiction List

First Focus: A Bond That Never Severed

Second Focus: The Lost Sparkling

Third Forcus: Transformers High

Renewing: Cloudride: A Seeker's Life (Originally A Seeker's Life), TFA: Static Saga (Orginally TFA: Autobot Lightning), TFP: Primary Twist (Originally and Trilogy of Story of a Teen's Adventure)

Predicting Stories: TFP: Operation STATIC, Shadow of a Gladiator, TFP: Tales of the TNT

Gaming Section (PS3 and PS4 players Only)

PS3 Games: TF: War for Cybertron, TF: Fall of Cybertron, TF: Rise of the Dark Spark, Naruto Shippuden Ultimate Ninja Storm 2, and Tekken 6

PS4 Games: TF Rise of the Dark Spark

PSN ID: lightning_prime4

Music Genre: R & B Soul, Rock, and a bit of Hip Hop

Favorite bands: Linkin Park, Nickelback, Staind, Evanescence, Cavo, All American Rejects, My Chemical Romance and Green Day

Favorite singer: Alicia Keys, Chris Brown, Usher, Ne-Yo, Beyounce, Eminem, Dr. Dre, Monica, R. Kelly, Drake, and Tyrese

XD XD XD I'M A TRANSFORMERS FAN!!! XD XD XD

The Following Series I watch/read:

G1

Beast Wars

Armada

Cybertron

Animated

Prime

IDW

Michael Bay Movies

TRANSFORMERS Q&A

WHO'S YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER?

Drift

WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF YOU MET YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER?

Pretty much ask questions on how to be a great swordsman or samurai

WHAT WOULD YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER DO IF HE/SHE MET YOU?

He would pretty much give me an odd wisdom

WHAT MUSIC DOES HE/SHE LISTEN TO?

Kinda like instrumental music

DO YOU HAVE AN OC?

Of course...I have tons

WHAT WOULD YOUR OC DO IF HE/SHE MET YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER?

Stick with them like partners

WHO IS YOU FAVORITE AUTOBOT?

Wheeljack

WHAT CRAZY THING COULD YOU IMAGINE HE/SHE DOING?

Blow things up. He loves that and so do I.

WHO IS YOUR FAVORITE DECEPTICON?

Lockdown...He may not be a con, but he used to be one

WHAT CRAZY THING COULD YOU IMAGINE HE/SHE DOING?

Pretty much hunt something down. That's fun.

WHAT WOULD YOUR FAVORITE AUTOBOT AND DECEPTICON DO IF THEY MET EACH OTHER?

Fight each other

WHO IS YOUR LEAST FAVORITE AUTOBOT?

Rodimus Prime. Sure he's funny but his actions, he is what my mom use. YNS, Young 'N Stupid

WHO IS YOUR LEAST FAVORITE DECEPTICON?

None. All of them are badasses

IF YOU COULD MARRY YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER, HOW MANY KIDS WOULD YOU HAVE?

Uh...what the hell?

WHAT IS YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMERS PAIRING?

Straight pairings only. Not into freakin TF Yaoi. It doesn't make sense to me..

HAVE YOU EVER CALLED A TRANSFORMER HOT?

What? Hell no. I rather say badass instead of Hot

IF YOU COULD TRANSFORM INTO A CAR, WHAT WOULD IT BE?

2014 Aston Martin DB9

WHO'S YOUR FAVORITE FEMALE AUTOBOT?

Arcee! IT'S ALWAYS ARCEE!!

WHAT SIDE WOULD YOU JOIN?

Autobots. Straight up Autobots. I support a bit of Decepticons.

Note: This poetry is based on the history I learned about slavery and the Middle Passage, and I had an "A" on this poem.

Tears from My Land

M.isery from that time

I.ncidents my ancestors were having

D.arkness life in that that ship my people were in

D.reams that were shattered by the Europeans

L.ife turned to death so many years

E.xcecuted by those same people

P.arts that I known when we set foot here

A.busive ways my people were in over 300 years

S.lavery was a huge nightmare

S.erving landowners and being traded

A.ssassinated….millions of them

G.od was still helping us from this tragic

E.veryone was never together at all

The Middle Passage, This Slavery

The tears from my land

Has passed on to us today

This is where we stand

- Toni (Lightning Prime, Age 16)

Copy and paste if you like this poem

My Random Quote List

"If you wanna talk, don't email

And don't you click- click click click

Just call me up at 555--VICK" -Doc (Red vs Blue)

"NAIL...NA-IL...It suits you" -Sideswipe (IDW, Transformers)

"I have a saying...I don't care." - Lockdown (TF4)

(There's more soon)

Any TF High Fans Alive out there? There is a little fan group of it where you can enjoy some activity and make new friends. Most likely make your own TF High Story. Come now, log onto Facebook and let's go!! : https://www.facebook.com/groups/472570886190273/

-LP (Age 16)

Fellow readers, my aspect of writing has returned and I am back with better skills. I finally succeeded high school and will be attending college, my artwork has improved as well and I am ready to take that tough path towards my ultimate goal. Alas, there will be a struggle for me that will affect anyone around me. I may change even more once I step into college, but I will still be that generous person, sweet and epic Transformers fan...but most of my personal may change for those six years. We shall see. I explored around Fanfiction.net seeing all the readers, friends, and the flamers. My friends had changed since I left here, and I see the flamers are not stopping until those writers know the point of the conflict. The numerous of Transformers fanfics had incredibly increased which is amazing to see though there are some rookie writers that must learn the experiences here on Fanfiction. Four years ago, I was a rookie writer that did not know the basics of writing, the knowledge of the Transformers, and was completely a Mary Sue creator. Right now, I learned the literary skills by the roleplays I had done on Facebook and what I had learn in my writing classes at my high school. I cherished that dearly and the flamers that came upon me given me the point, but seeing them messing with other writers...I cannot argue with them unless if it is too far.

So I will move onto my life with the skills and talent that God has given me ever since I came to this world. I am glad that I am here and enjoying my positive experiences.

LP (Age 18)

Lightning: A Mary Sue Test
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Me: Okay, Lightning, I made you when I was eleven...let's see how you are today in 2014..

Lightning: *nods* Right.

[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color.
[ } Their eyes are an unusual color.
[ ] This eye color happens to be red.
] Their eyes change color.
[ ] They have wings.
[ ] They can grow extra body PARTS/shapeshift.
[ ] They are immortal.
[ ] [If female.] They have a large breast size. [just a C]
] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc.
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
[ ] They are a healer.
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal FAMILY.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal BACKGROUND.
[x ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
[ ] They never knew their parents.
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends.
[ ] They are emo/cutesy.
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
[ ] They have a mental DISORDER.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psycho.
[ ] They have multiple personalities. [2]
[X] They are very intelligent.
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits/demons/angels etc..
[x ] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name.
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at BIRTH/a young age.
] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
[ ] They always dress like a certain "labels"
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood.
] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something.
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood.
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
[ ] They are very lively/happy.
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
[ x] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[ ] They have INSOMNIA.
Overall Points : 5Point Reduction :
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements :
1. [ ] They smoke.
2. ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [x] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent MEDICAL condition.
Total: 1
Final Score : 6

RESULT :

05 : Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

06-15 : Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 : Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 : Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... NOW.
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Me: Lightning, you've become a Balanced Character and I'm proud that I created you since I was eleven...but if it was a Transformers related Mary Sue Test, it would be more different.

Lightning: Yes indeed...Peeps, Artists, Roleplayers, if you insist on taking this quiz, you may copy the quiz and see what your OC is at. Lightning was too perfect back when I was eleven...now I made her balanced. Enjoy the quiz.

Oh my God, YES!! My bf found something what I'm looking for.

HOW TO AVOID BECOMING A WEEABOO!!

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That's it for now. L.Prime out and enjoy reading my stories. ;D