Name: Hugh Jackson Favourite Genre: Thriller/War/Fantasy

Age: 17 Writing Genre: Fantasy/Teen Angst

Hi people I wouldn't really class myself as a brilliant author or even a good one but ive given writing a go and i wanted to see if anyone likes what I've done. It is my first ever story and it could be lacking a bit on description but its full to the brim with gramatical errors so does that make up for it? It's designed for groovy/crazy teenagers who have a good imagination and can be quite childish. If that sounds like you and you can spare 20 minutes give my story a go. If you do like it (and you may have guessed by the end) I have started writing a sequal which will hopefully be more realistic longer and better descriptions so enjoy...

New story, very different to the last as I was inthe mood for something more serious since I've been in Australia. A lot of the feelings are extreme exagerations of a traveller such as myself. It's all yours.

p.s. please give it a good review if you like it or just nothng if you hate it cos its my first story so give it a break :p