Hello i dont know what to say. I guess just enjoy the reading session. The first one was an actually story i tried to write a in october of 09, but then i stopped because i thought it was either bad, moving too fast, didnt explain enough, or was copying a few elements from other stories. But i got a revamped interest in rewriting it from the beginning which im in the process of doing. THis is just teh first draft i guess you could say and is about 99 pages from the time i left it. if you have any constructive criticism please do tell. if i suck at writing, just tell me to stop haha.