Hello. My Name is TenNoTorii, it means “Heaven’s Shrine Gate” or ”Heavenly Shrine Gate”. I’m from Osaka,Japan but have been living in Vermont, USA for the past 2 years. I would like to further my English and I am currently 15. I’m not that much of a anime watcher(I think thats what you say) or manga reader. I like reading in general or playing baseball. I plan on writing a FanFic based off of Naruto as I have been reading a lot of Naruto FanFics.

THE NEXT FEW PARAGRAPHS IS JUST ME RANTING ABOUT THE STUPID THINGS IN NARUTO!

I have been reading quite a lot of Naruto fanfics lately, and I am just annoyed by 2 things: Naruto’s loud and obnoxious personality and Hinata’s timid and shy nature. Naruto is too brash and obnoxious for me. I know it was because of the Village’s treatment of him and his way of trying to get attention or maybe Kushina’s personality. I am a more silent type so maybe it is just me, but I can understand that it is Kishimoto’s way of writing a Shonen genre Manga/Anime but Naruto really needs to learn how to shut up sometimes. For this reason I highly recommend the discontinued Iga Naruto. (Although discontinued, it is a highly recommended series for those that enjoy a more grey and not loud Naruto). Second thing is the issue of Hinata’s character in it of itself. I feel she has been made to be too timid and shy to the point of it being annoying. And the pairing of Naruto/Hinata is too overused and most of them not well written. I am not criticizing their work, no. I am merely stating that for a pairing to work you need a back ground on why the pairing would and how it will work. And please don’t give me shit about ”The pairing has to be Naruto/Hinata because it is canon”. I say fuck the canon. Boruto in my opinion is a piece of shit! This is a fucking FanFiction website, it’s in the fucking name! So that means that out of all the goddamn Naruto universe, Naruto could have fallen in love with anyone! Why the fuck does it have to be Hinata? I am not bashing her character! But no! Which is why I am very conflicted with the series ”Legacy” by Cr4zypt as I do enjoy a OP Naruto as much as the next guy, and the series ”Neo-Yondaime” but the first question that came to mind while reading the stories was ”Why the fuck is he with Hinata?”. The NarutoXHinata Pairing is so overused that I skipped a lot of potentially good FanFics (From now on I’m referring FanFics as FF) because of a Naruto/Hinata pairing. I have no problem with the pairing but I’m sick and tired of reading the stories about them. Sometimes if the reviews are good enough I read the N/H pairing stories. Sometimes I read and read then a N/H pairing comes out and ruins that story. If you think I dislike Hinata then yes I do, not in her character but in the overuse of N/H that it’s border line hair pulling.

Oh yes, what did I forget. Sakura. She’s a bitch. If I was a Character in Naruto, I would slap her. And Sasuke. Naruto might as well fucking marry him. His optimism sickens me. Naruto as a series would be rated a T here in FF website, as I stated earlier, Kishimoto made Naruto to be a Shonen Manga/Anime. So Naruto’s optimism and naivety is to be kinda expected but holy shit did Kishimoto take it too far. Kishimoto turned the optimism meter from limit 10 to a fucking thousand. The end of the Fourth Great Shinobi War is that the Nations (Basically the 5 Great Villages) comes together and is allied. Jiraiya’s Version of Peace is formed and everyone lives happily. So what about the other Nations? and Bandits? and other Missing Nins? The human nature is that we embody the seven sins of humanity. There'll always be greed and anger. It’s a part of us. So yes, I am a bit upset about Naruto’s ending. (I don’t consider Boruto a part of Naruto as that is a piece of shit). Oh! And let us not forget about killing. They live in a fucking Shinobi world! Shinobis are assassins, how the fuck has Naruto not killed yet? None of his enemies are killed are killed by him! And what the fuck is with the talking your enemies to your side? You are fighting in a goddamnned life lt death situation! Especially considering that Naruto is 1. Dumb as fuck and 2. Has no skill in Genjutsu,Fuinjutsu,Taijutsu,Ninjutsu,Bukijutsu, and hand-seals. Let me explain. Genjutsu, He needs Kurama to help break it, Fuinjutsu, He is a Uzumaki, his parents are Fuinjutsu masters and so is Jiraiya. Taijutsu, the frog Kata does not count, as that needs senjutsu to work. Ninjutsu, All he does is spam 2 things: Shadow clones and Rasengans. With this is he's a one(two) trick pony. Bukijitsu, he only uses Shurikens and Kunais so it is not bad but not good either. The final point is hand-seals. If you are afraid of Uchihas copying your ninjutsu or genjutsu then reduce the number of hand-seals. Marada did the Katon:Goka Mekkyaku! with one hand-seal. Tobirama did the Suiton:Suiryudan no Jutsu! in one hand-seal as well when I know it uses like 44 hand-seals. Haku did half hand-seals. So why the fuck not do other Shinobi? Because inconvenient writings. Oh well, anyway. Sasuke's Rinne-Mankegyou Sharingan along with Naruto's Sage of Six Paths Senjutsu Bullshit with the Charka Transmigration are both BS. That is basically Kishimoto stating "Fuck you!" to Naruto's and Sasuke's personality as what Kishimoto is saying "Naruto=Ashura and Sasuke=Indra” that means that their characteristics is not even their own! The Rinnegan and SPSM (Six Paths Sage Mode/Six Paths Senjutsu) is Kishimoto's way of saying "Oh here is a huge power up fo you two!" And they don't really get to fight Madara all that much before Kaguya appears.

Another point the Uchiha clan. I will come out and say it. I find the members of the Clan to be Assholes and such, but their techniques is quite interesting like Enton:Honoikazuchi. The uchiha clan at the end is just so fucked up it’s beyond me. Kishimoto was just pulling Susanoo’s out of his ass at that point.

The pairings I absolutely hate?

NarutoXHinata (Too overused)

NarutoXSakura (Too much of a bitch for me to handle)

NarutoXMassiveHarem (A Harem size should be only between 2-5 no more)

Yaoi pairings (I have no problems with gay people, as I have gay friends. I just don’t enjoy them)

Pairings I enjoy

NarutoXTayuya (If done right. I recommend Pantheon of the Nine.)

NarutoXTemari (It’s not a bad pairing. Ideally Temari would take care of Naruto.)

NarutoXHarem (2-5 max.)