Hello,

I'm Critiquer876. If you haven't guesses it by now, this account I made is purely to review people. I will not be posting stories through this account.

I do, however, have another account that I do post stories from, but I'm not going to tell you which that is. I think many of you would review or trash my stories badly just because I might say some bad things about your own. On this account, I will hardly ever, if ever, say anything close to "great chapter! update soon!" because that is not a review, that's fluff. In my opinion, fluff is pointless stuff. It doesn't improve your writing and most people who write that couldn't care less if you update soon or not. They also probably didn't even read your chapter, just skimmed it. Who has time to read every little thing these days? Certainly not me.

So with this account, I will be giving you other authors constructive critisicm about your story. Mostly it will be about obvious things, because like I said, I don't have the time to read every little thing.

Nothing I write is meant to be taken as a flame. Flames are just a pointless as my version of fluff.

~Critiquer876

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For those of you who are going to ignore my advice, because I am sure there will be at least one person out there who will, I suggest you take a look at the stories linked below under 'favorited.' They're the rules of Avatar fanfiction. I did not write them, but I agree with them 100. So if you're choose to ignore me, take a good look at these rules.

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Alright, here's a vocabulary lesson for you all.

Deus un machina- this means in literary terms that your story had a cheesy ending. Your story had lots of build up with conflict but you ended it poorly.