(previous pen name: emeraldluck)

I love to read (which describes 100% of visitors to fanfiction.net), and decided I wanted to write too. I would appreciate any feedback and constructive criticism to my stories so that I could improve my writing skill.

Though currently working on my Star Wars fanfic (my first fanfic ever!), I hope to write for other series (haven't decided which ones yet). I'll first finish the Star Wars fanfic before starting anything new.

Thanks for visiting :)

Current Projects:

(Star Wars) The Chase Through Time --(previously titled: The Chase That Would Span Centuries)--I know it looks like I've forgotten about it, but I've decided to finish writing the first draft of the rest of the story so that the times between chapter posts are smaller. (Why will there still be wait times between chapters, you ask? Well, editing takes time.) This way the chapter won't consist of the first thing that pops into my head, and hopefully the quality, of the chapters themselves, will be better and so will the flow between chapters. Oh, and hopefully I'll actually have a cover for this by the time chapter 5 is posted.
Expect chapter 5 by spring/summer of 2015.

Areas of Criticism

(list in progress)

Here is a list for things I look for when writing (and you readers can spot these better because you're an objective party--I would love any help in these areas).

Pacing: Does the story drag? Are you finding it difficult to get through the paragraph? If so, where?

Clarity: Are some parts confusing or hazy? Are you reading a sentence and you're not sure what I mean?

Setting: Are there not enough details? Do you feel the characters are voices floating around in air just talking back and forth? If so, where?

Too Much Information: Is there too much detail? So much so that you feel the story would be better if it was cut out? Do you find yourself skipping entire paragraphs?

Characters: Are the characters consistent in personality? Are the characters defined enough (ie. one cannot be interchanged with another)?

Writing: As for this one, it can only be improved through LOTS of practice. I already know I need to work on it. I have a long road ahead of me.

Flow: Do you find that the writing abruptly cuts to a new idea, jarring you from the story?