Hello,

I am Lady of the Night by day critique of fashion, and Layout Design. My display Name is Sour&Sweet because that is just what I am sour but sweet. The same way I critique Fashion I critique fan fiction. My reviews are either sour meaning: there are things you need to change to make it better. Sweet meaning: such parts that made the story amazing.

The list of stories that I have at the bottom are mostly stories that have both great lemons and unique writing technique. I love new writers because they all ways have a diverse way of writing. I will read any story anyone asks me to look over, but if it needs work I will not hold back my opinion.

My preferred fics to read are mostly hurt/comfort I am a big evaluator on how a person story truly has pain in it. If it doesn’t touch me my heart or make me cry it is not a real hurt/comfort fan fiction it’s just drama. If I really like a fan fiction I will post why the story is remarkable.

Stories in Progress:

Be Careful What You Wish For: I love the story so far I can’t wait for it to be done once it is completely done it will flow together perfectly.

Completed Stories:

The Change: Well this is my favorite Jasper and Leah story even though it is an unorthodox pairing the writer still finds a way to write them in a way most people who try to write them can’t. Even though the chapters are short it’s still intense and leaves the reader wanting more.

Eye Candy: There are a lot of things can say about eye candy, but the one thing that comes to mind is unique writing skills.

Dreams of Passion

Vehement hunger stirs my mind to wake me from my conscious dreams

Incalescent waves of passion against which I am bound

Forsake me now, my gilded goddess. Whose heart like sapphire gleams

Lead me to your splendored touch, my senses yet confound

Your visage haunts my mortal blood, while palms remain alone

I mourn your touch. My heart’s dirge trumpets slowly for your caress

Memories bleeding through my soul without our dyad known

But hope still lingers ever forward while your heart I possess

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