I'm an aspiring young writer/poet would has plenty ideas for my stories but because I'm inexperienced, I'm afraid my stories come off as cheesy with unmemorable characters. I don't want to come off as this. I'm currently working on a story that is in the making and I'm posting it to get help in story development and characters so that it may be finalized some time in the future. I'll gladly accept any constructive criticism regarding my current story "White Heart" it's original title "The Daughter of White".