Hey people of the world! I'm a 16 year old girl who loves to write. Please help me improve by reviewing and following! Thanks!!!

Stuff I love:

Books: The Hunger Games, The Mistmantle Series, Redwall Series, Percy Jackson Series, Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, The Silmarillion,

Music: Taylor Swift (especially her song "Safe and Sound"), Steven Curtis Chapmen, Meg Murray, Megan Nicole, Cimorelli, and LOTS of other artists.

Activities: Reading, swimming, archery, singing, hanging out with my friends, reading stories on FanFiction.

Please comment on my story(s), and tell me how I could improve, or what you like about them. Thanks so much to everyone!

Edward sucks
Jacob stinks
But Percy Jackson can shoot water out of his nose!

97% of teens would cry if they saw Robert Pattison
(Edward Cullen from Twilight) standing on top of a skyscraper, about to
jump.

If you're one of the 3% who would sit, eating popcorn
screaming "DO A BACK
FLIP YOU SPARKLY IDIOT!"
then copy and paste this on your status. :D

This is This cat
This is is cat
This is how cat
This is to cat
This is keep cat
This is an cat
This is idiot cat
This is busy cat
This is for cat
This is forty cat
This is seconds cat

Go back and read the 3rd word in every sentence (I made some guys in my class do that two of them didn't get it)

Justin Beiber falls off a building 90% of girls are crying.

9% are taking pictures and eating popcorn.

1% are pushing Justin off the building. Copy and paste this on your status if your one of the 9% or 1% pushing Justin off the building.

(\_/)
( o.o)
(U U )

This is bunny. Copy and paste this bunny into your profile to help him gain world domination. (do it now)

] I need to tell you a secret LOOK AT 5

[2] The answer is LOOK AT 11

[3] Dont get mad LOOK AT 15

[4] Calm down don't be mad LOOK AT 13

[5] First LOOK AT 2
[6] Dont be that angry LOOK AT 12
[7] I just wanna say hi
[8] What I wanted to tell you is...THE ANSWER IS ON 14
[9] Be patient LOOK AT 4
[10] This is the last time I'm going to do this LOOK AT 7
[11] I hope you're not mad when I say this LOOK AT 6
[12] Sorry LOOK AT 8
[13] Don't be getting a hype LOOK AT 10
[14] I dont know how to say this LOOK AT 3

[15] You must be really mad LOOK AT NUMBER 9