Ttl-Eclipz
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Joined 06-20-04, id: 614123
Helluuuuu everybody!
Well after 5 hours of bangin’ my head against the wall I was finally able to log on! Not FF.net's fault, though- my #$@! computer wasn't working, or more like my internet connection. Well now that I got through THAT let's talk about me some more.

I am female (Girlz rule!), just in case you had any doubts about that, with my pin name and all
+I was born in Mexico (and proud of it too), and moved to the States almost 8 years ago, which leads me to my next point- obviously English is not my first language so if you guys read any of my stuff don't expect it to be perfect (Hint: grammar!), my English doesn't just wonder off, it completely leaves sometimes.
+I like to read, but my greatest love is music. I'm not exaggerating when I say I listen to all kinds, from opera to electronic, and in all languages. I know Spanish, English, and have been taking French lessons for almost 6 years now, and my next target is Italian, which I plan to study during the summer. Voglio parlare Italiano!
+People tell me I have a $#@!&% attitude problem, but I just tend to ignore them...after throwing that little compliment back at them.

AND MOST IMPORTANTLY+
'By Dawn' is my first ever Fanfic- of any kind. Please be gentle with me. I know my writing tends to go around in circles a lot, and this probably won't be the exception. I'm glad I build up the courage to post this, though. However...I have to know whether you like it or not, if you don't I would really hate to continue writing for NO ONE'S enjoyment. The idea for the story is pretty bland I guess, nothing incredibly original, but I got the urge to write it, let's see how it comes out

SPOILER WARNING! If you haven't seen the movie and don't want me ruining it for you then I wouldn't recommend reading the first chapter, but I suppose it would be necesary for you to get the rest, sorry.

Do not read from here on down if you do not want spoilers!+
The first chapter is a retelling of Riddick's rescue of Jack, or Kyra, from prison, but really its just a telling of their reunion and Kyra's feeling about it. I fear I may have gotten too melodramatic, though. You tell me. +FURTHER CONSIDERATIONS AND ALLOWANCES FOR 'By Dawn'- PLIS READ+
First of all- I'm in love with Riddick, and his twin Vin, and Ttl_Eclipz is NOT beyond fantasizing about having those two fight over her. Who would win? Does not matter much, Ttl_Eclipz will not be picky in this case.
--Now SERIOUSLY! !!IMPORTANT!!--
Taking under consideration the aforementioned fact you will know I was too busy drooling all through 'The Chronicles' and I will admit I wasn't putting close attention to the things I now find myself in need to know. Could I get I volunteer who DID put attention to correct me in any mistakes I might have made in my first chapter? I would really like to have it right, like IE: How much exactly did Jack tell Riddick about their years apart (what happens to her and what she went through, if you think you remember the words or close enough to the actual words I would appreciate the help. Has the script been released yet? that would be even better)?. Did they mention how long she was in jail? What is the prison's name ( I forgot)? How did Jack fall out of Imam's hand's? What was her main crime for being incarcerated? etc etc I should go see it again, and believe me , I WILL. I would also appreciate help with some technical terms, is there some one out there who speaks 'Pitch Black' or some 'Riddick'?
Suggestions for the course of the story and what you would like to see are also welcomed, as well as chew outs like "THIS IS SOOOOO OOC" AND " WOULD YOU LIGHTEN UP A LITTLE!", but seriously I have no serious plans and I would like to avoid writer’s cramp with your help.
I will leave it at that, this is beginning to look like a full fledged novel, lol. Its 2:00 am, do YOU know where your children are? No, but I do know ‘I’ should be in bed.

VIVA RIDDICK!!!
Oh yea….Disclaimer: No, Riddick is not mine, Feh!