Tilmarill
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Joined 12-12-09, id: 2177033, Profile Updated: 12-15-09
Author has written 1 story for Criminal Minds.

I've never written fanfiction in my entire life.

I love to make my own fantasyspinn-offs out of fictional characters
but I've never put it down on paper. I guess it is since I can't
come up with an ending. But after watching Criminal Minds three nights
in a row I decided to give it a try. Since I don't have the ability to write
satisfying endings I decided; Why not write a really short intro, post it
on the internet and let every person who like write a story after that
intro. Said and done, I wrote and now I'm about to publish this so everyone
thats interested can continue in a way they like. My only wish is that you
publish the story or send it to me. I think it could be a fun project =)

The intro is clearly supposed to be rated M since it deals with strong
language, violence and hints of non consensual sex. My thought was
about a Reid/OC story, but thats all up to you guys. Have fun =)

Quick breaths inhale and try to count to five. Trying to calm the breathing down, to stop her hands from shivering.
High heels making clicking sounds on the crossroad and her eyes furiously blinking away the tears that threaten to start.
A young woman dressed in a short dress and high heeled boots. Her long red hair was tangled in a mess and her face was pale as if she’d seen a ghost.
Oh my god, he’s going to kill me
She freezed in the corner of the street, struggled to get her breath under control and thereafter crossed the street and walked up to a heavily built man.
What the hell took you so long, you fucking whore?!
He gave a quick look around and then slapped her right across the face. She gasped, tears whelming up in her eyes automatically of the sharp pain.
I-I-I’m so sorry… He refused to pay, I tried… He hit me…
She fell silent, watching him with eyes begging for mercy. He took hold of her chin, forced her to meet his eyes with his face only inches away from hers.
Don’t lie to me you stupid bitch! I know you didn’t stay, you see he came back and told me exactly what you did.
He spit out every word right in her face.
He told me that you ran away. Just wait ‘til we get back home. I will tell Victor what a lying worthless whore you are and you can be sure that he will hurt you so you can’t work for weeks. Thereafter He’ll probably fuck you half dead and this time I won’t try to calm him down.
She shivered from head to toe when he let go of her chin and clenched his hand in to a fist.
No! Please, don’t hit me! I’ll do anything, just don’t tell Victor. I-I-I can get the money I swear. I can find another guy, I swear I won’t run away!
She raised her arms covering her head as he raised his fist then all of a sudden there was a loud bang and the man fell to the ground.

Morning, Spence, the team is already gathered in the conference room, I left you the files on your desk.
J.J hurried passed Reid on her way to the conference room with a large pile of documents in her arms.
And please hurry.

That's the intro, hope someone can find this as an interesting project. Have fun =D

If I die
What to tell? No idea. Pretty strong language, some violence and sexual hints.
Criminal Minds - Rated: M - English - Crime/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 418 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/15/2009